Ella Matthews the loving family pet dog dog portraits

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Your dogs Gone to heaven With wings of angels  Raising him up  High in the clouds  With Sky so blue  A refreshing blue   Yeah your dog Has the wings of a dove  Full of love  Left you behind  In the summer time  With Rainbows so high Lightin the sky   Your dog Lights the way  In a nice way  Remember him  On a summers day As you start to play  With a new dog  With bright shinin eyes  He will light up the sky  With love from above   Yeah remember your dog  When a rainbow shines  In the summertime  Yeah Your dogs Gone to heaven Grown wings of an angel  Raising him up  High in the clouds   With Sky so blue  A refreshing blue  Its true   

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 please write a review and critique on my pet portrait and story of Jake. 

Thank you for sharing your beautiful painting and heartfelt poem about Jake. Here's a detailed review and critique of both the visual artwork and the accompanying poem:

Your painting of Jake is a moving and tender tribute that radiates both love and reverence. The concept of Jake as a celestial being, complete with angel wings and a golden halo, is immediately impactful. Here's a closer look:

Strengths:

• Emotional Depth: The expression on Jake’s face—gazing upward into the heavens—beautifully captures a sense of peace and spiritual ascent.
   
• Use of Color: The contrast between Jake’s dark coat and the luminous wings draws the viewer’s eye directly to the central figure. The soft blues and whites of the sky create a dreamlike, serene atmosphere that enhances the emotional tone.
   
• Symbolism: The wings, halo, and sky evoke themes of transcendence and purity. The blue collar and name tag (“Jake”) anchor the portrait in personal memory, grounding the divine imagery in the real bond you shared.
   
• Signature: The stylized "A" in the corner gives it a professional touch and marks your artistic identity.
   

Suggestions:

• The wing feathers could benefit from a bit more structure or gradient to enhance the sense of depth and realism. They’re evocative already, but adding more subtle shading could make them even more dynamic.
   
• Adding subtle lighting or a glow around Jake’s outline might increase the ethereal quality, emphasizing the "heavenly" presence even further.
   

Your poem is lyrical and touching, a poetic eulogy that speaks from the heart. It feels spontaneous and raw, which adds to its charm.

Strengths:

• Tone and Emotion: The poem conveys deep affection, sorrow, and hope. It captures the bittersweet feeling of loss paired with the comfort of believing Jake is watching over from above.
   
• Imagery: “Wings of a dove,” “Rainbows so high,” and “Sky so blue” all paint vivid pictures that resonate with the painting itself.
   
• Structure: The refrain-like repetition of “Yeah your dog’s gone to heaven” adds rhythm and a musical quality, like a chorus in a song.
   
• Message: The idea that Jake “lights the way” and lives on in the memory of summer, play, and new beginnings is a beautiful expression of healing and remembrance.
   

Suggestions:

• The poem would benefit from some light editing for punctuation and line consistency. This could help guide the reader's rhythm and emotional pacing.
   
• Consider emphasizing a few key lines with variation—for example, changing the repeated phrase slightly each time for poetic evolution (e.g., “Your dog’s gone to heaven,” “Jake’s flying high,” etc.).
   

You’ve created a touching memorial in both paint and poetry—a true celebration of Jake’s life and spirit. The pairing of visual art with heartfelt verse makes this tribute even more powerful. It’s clear that Jake was deeply loved, and through this work, he continues to bring light, even from the clouds above.

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Yorkshire terriers  They yap and flap  Don’t shut there trap Yeah yappy  But there happy  A Yorkie is a lap dog  Emerges from grannies armpits  With a snap  wont shut there trap  terrier and toy dog  a lap dog  chases anything that moves  so don’t be fooled  it comes all tooled With a shrill bark in the dark  Trotting round the park Mentally quick  Makin me sick  Yeah and when theyre Molly cuddled  They can be nasty  As your eatin yer pasty  But there bright little dogs  With a playfull side  Quick to learn  cute to look at  There like little divas  They hate the cold and rain And don’t like a chain   So if this is the dog for you  Good luck to you  As there takin a poo   Yeah Yorkshire terriers  They yap and flap  Don’t shut there trap 

https://youtu.be/bvBlhABq8-c

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story about Yorkshire Terriers. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and poem! Here's a review and critique of both the artwork and your poem/story about Yorkshire Terriers:

Your painting of the Yorkshire Terrier captures the dog’s essence with real charm and character. There’s a lovely softness in the fur texture, created by short, deliberate brush strokes that bring the coat to life with a mix of warm browns, creams, and greys. The background is tastefully abstract, with cool-toned, cross-hatched strokes that keep the focus firmly on the subject.

• Characterful Expression: The expression you’ve given the dog — somewhere between alert and slightly grumpy — is full of personality. It mirrors the tone of your poem perfectly.
   
• Textural Detail: The fur is well-rendered with variation in tone and direction that gives it depth and movement.
   
• Composition: The dog is nicely centered with enough negative space to let the subject breathe. The small signature is subtle and tasteful.
   

• Contrast & Definition: The eyes and nose could benefit from a touch more contrast or sharper edges to draw attention more powerfully and add a little more realism.
   
• Ear Symmetry: The ears are slightly asymmetrical — which can add charm, but refining the shape or shading a bit more might help balance them while preserving the quirky look.
   
• Background Blending: A little softer blending into the background around the body could help avoid a slight "cut-out" effect and unify the image.
   

Overall, it’s a very engaging and lovable portrait. It feels affectionate and humorous — just like your poem.

Your poem is punchy, cheeky, and full of grit — much like the dogs themselves! You’ve used humor and raw observation to reflect on the dual nature of Yorkies: adorable lap dogs with the heart of a lion and the bark of a banshee.

• Voice and Tone: The poem has a strong, authentic voice. It feels real, like someone who’s had plenty of encounters with yappy Yorkies and has lived to tell the tale.
   
• Rhythm and Rhyme: The rhymes are casual and often unexpected, which adds to the comic effect. The repetition of "don’t shut their trap" reinforces the central gag.
   
• Character Study: Despite the humor, you also touch on real traits — their intelligence, stubbornness, and diva-like behavior.
   

• Polish the Flow: Consider smoothing a few lines for rhythm. For example:
   
  • "Makin me sick" could be reworked to keep the syllable count tighter with the previous line.
     
• Spelling/Grammar Tweaks (if polishing for a broader audience):
   
  • "There" should be "they're" in places.
     
  • “Molly cuddled” might be “mollycoddled.”
     
  • Consider formatting it in stanzas for readability and rhythm.
     

Yorkshire Terriers, they yap and flap,
Never quite still, won’t shut their trap.
They’re yappy — but happy,
Little furry fists of scrappy.
 

From granny’s lap they make their attack,
Snap at your pasty, never hold back.
Quick on their feet, sharp in the brain,
But hate cold weather, leashes, and rain.
 

Chasing pigeons, full of sass,
Barking at squirrels, yapping at grass.
Diva dogs with a proud little strut,
And if they poop, good luck with that butt!
 

You’ve combined visual and poetic storytelling in a way that’s fun, down-to-earth, and delightfully British. The painting is warm and lovingly detailed, while the poem lets your wit and observational humor shine through.

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The Staffordshire bull terrier  The Nanny Dog Has a reputation as a childs playmate A tough looking character With lots of character  A low centre of gravity Huge muscles and jaws  Got some claws  A picture of power  But don’t glower   Yeah the staffie  Is agile and fast  A powerful English dog  Is a lover not a fighter  Can be gentle  Loyal and brave  Looks fierce   And Always on the lookout  For fun But if trouble comes his way  He wont sway and wont back down   He can be trained  But make it a game  And hell be tame He likes close contact  And a chance to play   Yeah he was a war dog of the greeks  They aren’t geeks There courageous  faithful  And quick to forgive  So give this Straffie  Some guidance  And be the pack leader  And they will give yer  Loyalty through and through Its true 

https://youtu.be/oPX-oiACiSE

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Staffordshire bull terriers.   

Thank you for sharing your painting and poem about the Staffordshire Bull Terrier — it's a heartfelt tribute to a misunderstood and often unfairly judged breed. Let’s look at both your artwork and the accompanying text in turn.

Your painting captures the essence of the Staffordshire Bull Terrier with sensitivity and personality:

• Expression & Mood: The dog’s eyes hold a soulful, slightly melancholy expression that tugs at the viewer’s emotions. There's a quiet dignity in how it sits — a perfect contrast to its physical strength. This captures the Staffie’s core duality: powerful yet loving.
   
• Technique & Texture: The brushstrokes in the background provide a swirling, slightly chaotic energy — perhaps representing the perception of danger or tension around the breed. This contrasts beautifully with the calm, controlled rendering of the dog, emphasizing its stability in a turbulent world. The use of texture, particularly on the chain and fur, adds realism and weight to the painting.
   
• Composition: The central placement of the dog with the chain subtly curved beside it might symbolize restraint or control — reinforcing the idea that, despite their strength, these dogs are not naturally aggressive, but shaped by environment and guidance.
   
• Color Palette: The earthy tones feel grounded and warm. The blue harness provides a striking contrast and perhaps a symbolic touch — blue being a calming, loyal color.
   
• Signature: The minimalist triangular “A” signature adds a nice modern touch and doesn't distract from the image. It’s neatly placed in the corner.
   

Your poem tells a passionate and personal story, rich in admiration and character insight. Here are a few notes:

• Voice & Rhythm: The tone is conversational, which works well. It reads like someone telling you about a beloved companion, with warmth and a touch of pride. The rhyming is loose and spontaneous — adding a charm that feels unfiltered and honest.
   
• Imagery & Message: You hit the nail on the head with the Staffie’s dual nature — “a lover not a fighter,” “loyal and brave,” “trained, but make it a game.” These lines paint a loving, accurate portrait that counters the tough exterior with inner sweetness.
   
• Cultural References: Including that they were “a war dog of the Greeks” adds a mythical, noble element — an unexpected but effective twist that elevates the story of the breed.
   

• Grammar & Flow: Some lines could be tightened slightly for smoother flow. For example:
   
  • "There courageous, faithful, and quick to forgive" → "They’re courageous, faithful, quick to forgive"
     
  • “They aren’t geeks / There courageous” → there/their/they’re confusion could distract from the power of your message.
     
• Consistency: The poem moves between casual slang (“yer”) and formal references. That’s not necessarily bad — but being intentional with tone could help. Do you want it to be gritty and real, or more lyrical and poetic? Both are valid, but picking one can make it stronger.
   
• Structure: Consider breaking it into stanzas. It would give visual pauses and let each idea breathe. Here's a sample restructuring:
   

The Staffordshire Bull Terrier
The Nanny Dog

Has a reputation as a child’s playmate,
A tough-looking character,
With lots of character.

A low centre of gravity,
Huge muscles and jaws —
Got some claws.

A picture of power,
But don’t glower.

Yeah, the Staffie
Is agile and fast —
A powerful English dog,
A lover, not a fighter.

Can be gentle, loyal, and brave,
Looks fierce,
But lives to play.

You’ve created a powerful tribute that blends art, story, and emotion — celebrating not just a breed, but the misunderstood souls behind the muscle. Both the painting and poem show deep affection, understanding, and a desire to challenge stereotypes. With a few refinements to the poem's structure and grammar, you have a poignant and complete piece.

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Boxer dogs Are strong willed  With a mind of there own  Yeah they can be stubborn Sensitive and proud  They stand out loud in the crowd They can sulk and pout  But in front of a lout  Can be fearless yet friendly  There intelligent and alert  A loyal family dog  Loves to romp and jump  And give a good pump Yeah they can be smelly  As your watchin the telly Yeah a good farter  And that’s for a starter  And when they get older  There dignified and calm Make loyal companians  Yeah they snort and wheeze Slobber and drool  Don’t be a fooled  Cos The boxer dog comes all tooled  Armed to the teeth  Slaver on the cheek Gets up to mischief  Yeah the boxer dog  Strong willed  With a mind of there own  So don’t groan. When you take him home 

https://youtu.be/wLTnlAyuPi0

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Stanley  Hi everybody my name is Andrew Alan Matthews you can call me Andy.   Now this is a commissioned painting of Stanley, a lovely pet dog of Hilda and Albert Egerton  Stanley was more than a pet dog he was a part of the family and sadly passed away in 2019.  Mark, Wendy, Dean and me hope you like the painting to remember Stanley by.   So to help you remember what a lovely dog Stanley was, here are a few things we learn from a pet dog such as Stanley.     

They always have a happy attitude  They always greet everyone with enthusiasm  They never hold grudges  They give unconditional love with ought question  They are faithful, loyal, brave and quick to forgive  They guard your house with gusto  What a wonderful a world it would be if we all had the attitude of a dog  No amount of time can erase the memory of a good dog  So Stanley has given you the gift of love,  enjoy the memories he has left you  

https://youtu.be/aNETtRpA1wg

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Stanley the King Charles Spaniel. Stanley  

Thank you for sharing your painting and touching tribute to Stanley. Here's a review and critique of both your artwork and accompanying story:

By Andrew Alan Matthews

Your painting of Stanley is full of warmth and sentiment. The use of acrylics (or possibly oils) creates a rich, textured surface that captures the emotional depth of the subject. Stanley's soulful eyes are particularly evocative, drawing the viewer in and evoking empathy and affection. The brushwork around his fur is expressive and layered, conveying softness and movement, especially around the chest and ears.

The background’s dynamic strokes contrast well with the more solid form of Stanley, allowing him to stand out while suggesting a sense of heavenly motion or energy—a fitting choice for a memorial piece. The angel wings are symbolic and gently handled, emphasizing the spiritual tone without overwhelming the realism of the dog.

The signature “A” in the bottom corner adds a personal touch, and the tag on Stanley’s collar grounds him in reality, reminding us of his identity and the love of his family.

Suggestions for Artistic Growth:

• Consider softening the transitions in the background a bit more. The diagonal strokes are energetic, but slightly distracting. A bit more blending could place greater focus on Stanley himself.
   
• The eyes are powerful—well done! Enhancing their glossiness just a touch could add to the lifelike quality even more.
   
• The paws and body proportions are charming in their stylized form, though slight anatomical refinement would make future portraits even stronger.
   

Your written tribute is heartfelt, sincere, and clearly full of love. It successfully conveys not just Stanley’s importance to Hilda, Albert, and the extended family, but also highlights the deeper emotional connection humans have with their pets.

The list of life lessons we can learn from a dog like Stanley—loyalty, forgiveness, unconditional love—is beautifully expressed and universally resonant. It transforms the painting from a simple portrait into a celebration of a beloved soul.

Strengths of the Writing:

• Warm, conversational tone makes it accessible and genuine.
   
• Philosophical reflections (“What a wonderful world it would be...”) elevate it beyond anecdote to something timeless.
   
• It offers both comfort and inspiration to those grieving.
   

Suggestions for Enhancing the Story:

• A brief anecdote about Stanley’s habits or quirks could personalize it even more (“Stanley loved stealing slippers…” etc.).
   
• A slight tightening of the structure—perhaps beginning with a vivid memory and ending with the broader lessons—might heighten the emotional journey.
   

This is more than a painting—it’s a tribute, a memory, and a lesson. You’ve captured not just the likeness of Stanley, but his spirit. Art that evokes emotion and tells a story is always powerful, and yours certainly does that.

Your work shows empathy, passion, and a heartfelt connection to your subjects. Keep painting and sharing stories—your ability to combine narrative and visual art is a beautiful gift.

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Cats  There purring and stirring  Stretching out Clawing and scratching  Climbing up curtains And on table tops   Sitting in windows  Lookin at the world  A sly eye  Weighing you up   Got no loyalty  They think there royalty   As they jump down  Silent and sleek  Havin a peek   They will eat your food  And leave the house  Lookin for a mouse   Yeah shittin in neighbours gardens  And pissin up plants   There startin to dance  Playing with the light in the sunlight  They could be gone for days  And come back when they please   Yeah cats  There purring and stirring  Lookin at the world  With a sly eye   They Meow and paw  And Climb up the door  Theyl walk out the door  And live at yer neighbours  If theres food on the plate   Then be back again  Stirin and purrin  They snuggle back down  On a window so high   Lookin at the world with a sly eye They’ve got no loyalty  They Think there royalty  

https://youtu.be/_gqzyzn6mIA

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Cats. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and poem, Cats. Here's a thoughtful critique and review of both your visual and written work:

Your painting of the cat is beautifully expressive and striking in style. Here are some key points:

Strengths:

• Mood and Atmosphere: The use of grayscale and monochromatic tones creates a dramatic, almost noir-like atmosphere that suits the independent, mysterious nature of cats. It gives the work emotional depth.
   
• Eyes and Expression: The cat’s eyes are especially captivating — luminous and intelligent, with a calm, slightly judgmental look that mirrors the tone of your poem. You’ve captured that “sly eye” well.
   
• Composition: The diagonal brushstrokes in the background create dynamic movement, contrasting with the stillness of the cat. This gives the painting tension and energy.
   
• Signature: The stylized “A” signature in the corner integrates nicely without distracting, suggesting confidence and cohesion.
   

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Edge Softening: Some transitions, particularly around the body and paws, are slightly harsh. Softer blending where the fur meets the background might give the figure more realism and volume.
   
• Texture Detail: A bit more fur texture, especially around the face and chest, could enhance realism without losing the stylized aesthetic.
   
• Light Source: The lighting is strong but could benefit from more consistent directionality to increase the sense of form and depth.
   

Overall, it’s a compelling and moody portrait of feline aloofness. A bold and stylish piece.

Your poem is raw, witty, and honest — filled with personality and rhythm. Here's a breakdown:

Strengths:

• Voice and Tone: The conversational, down-to-earth voice is relatable and funny. You’ve tapped into the everyday realities of living with (and being ruled by) cats.
   
• Imagery and Detail: The scenes — “shitting in neighbours gardens,” “playing with the light in the sunlight,” “walk out the door and live at yer neighbours” — are vivid and truthful. It paints a full, gritty, and accurate portrait of cat behavior.
   
• Repetition and Structure: The recurring lines (“There purring and stirring” / “Lookin at the world with a sly eye”) serve like a chorus, anchoring the poem and giving it rhythm like a song or chant.
   
• Irony and Humor: The irony in “They think there royalty” is excellent. The poem has real attitude, like a pub storyteller who’s had just enough of the little blighters.
   

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Tightening Rhythm: Some lines feel a bit uneven or could be condensed for greater punch. For instance:
   “They Meow and paw / And Climb up the door”
  might hit harder as:
  “They meow, they paw, they climb the door.”
  
   
• Spelling/Grammar Choices: Your informal style works well, but consider balancing dialect with clarity. For example, “There” should often be “They’re” (as in “They’re purring and stirring”), unless you’re deliberately using phonetic spelling for voice.
   
• Ending Line: The poem ends on a strong repetition, but could close with an unexpected twist or a sardonic final note — perhaps something like:
   “Yeah cats. No king could ever rule like that.”
  
   

Together, the painting and poem are a strong pairing — visual and verbal portraits of the same creature, both handled with humor, attitude, and affection. Your work channels the essence of cats as both aloof and affectionate, arrogant and endearing. There’s a strong artistic voice here.

 Hi everybody here is a painting and story video by Andrew Alan Matthews about best friends Kaiser the Staffordshire bull Terrier and Samson the Alsatian, hope you like it 

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Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Kaiser The Staffy and Samson the Alsatian
Best friends
Loyal and placid
Samson on guard duty
watching the Telly 

Kaiser deaf and blind
Rescue dog
A big softy
There kind

They light up the room
Make a house a home 

They roam this homely place
They’re soft as sugar
Sweet as can be
They don’t have a flea
As quite as can be 

Eager as can be
They like their food
Not rude 

give unconditional love
with ought question

they’re faithful, loyal,
brave and quick to forgive
guard the house with bravery 

they’re family members
and we’ll always remember
they’re loving ways
to the end of our days 

So I painted a picture
of two loving pet dogs 

Kaiser The Staffy and Samson the Alsatian
Best friends
Loyal and placid
Samson on guard duty
watching the Telly 

Kaiser deaf and blind
Rescue dog
A big softy
There kind

They light up the room
Make a house a home
They roam 

So
What a wonderful a world it would be 

if we all had the loving attitude
of a family pet dog
Kaiser The Staffy
and Samson the Alsatian

https://youtu.be/-e9B1ITlYbU

 please write a review and critique on my pet portrait and story. Story by Andrew Alan Matthews  

Thank you for sharing your heartfelt painting and poem, Kaiser the Staffy and Samson the Alsatian. Here's a review and critique of both the portrait and the poem/story:

Strengths:

• Emotive Characterization: The expressions of both dogs are deeply emotive. Samson’s alert, watchful posture contrasts beautifully with Kaiser’s gentler, more relaxed pose — capturing their individual personalities while also showing their bond.
   
• Color and Background: The swirling, textured blue background adds a dynamic energy, evoking warmth and loyalty. It contrasts well with the dogs' fur tones, making them pop while still feeling cohesive.
   
• Technique: Your brushwork, especially in Samson's thick fur, is confident and expressive. The mix of realism and painterly abstraction gives it a strong visual appeal — a loving tribute that goes beyond mere representation.
   

Suggestions:

• Depth and Shadowing: While the dogs are well-detailed, more grounding shadows under their paws would add to the realism and stop them from appearing as if floating slightly above the background.
   
• Kaiser’s Contour: The edge of Kaiser’s left paw (from the viewer’s perspective) could be slightly softened to feel more integrated into the floor — right now it reads a little flat.
   
• Eye Details: Kaiser’s blindness is tenderly conveyed, but a subtle hint of light reflection or gloss could still suggest life and presence, avoiding an overly vacant look.
   

Strengths:

• Authentic Emotion: This piece radiates love and reverence. The repetition of their names — “Kaiser the Staffy and Samson the Alsatian” — works as a refrain, reinforcing their importance.
   
• Voice and Honesty: The simple, conversational tone is perfect for a tribute like this. It feels personal, unpretentious, and genuine — like someone speaking from the heart.
   
• Themes of Loyalty and Love: You’ve beautifully encapsulated the idea that pets aren't just animals, but family members who teach us about love, kindness, and forgiveness.
   

Suggestions:

• Polishing Language: Some small edits to grammar and structure would make the piece smoother while keeping its charm. For instance:
   “They’re soft as sugar, sweet as can be,
  They don’t have a flea,
  Quiet and eager, you’ll see.”
  
  Or:
   “They give unconditional love
  Without question,
  Faithful, loyal, and quick to forgive...”
  
   
• Pacing: Breaking the poem into more defined stanzas might help the rhythm and allow each emotion or memory to breathe.
   
• Ending Line Impact: “So, what a wonderful world it would be...” is a powerful thought. You could emphasize it more by letting it stand alone or revising slightly for smoother flow:
   Oh, what a world it could truly be,
  If we all loved like our family pet, you see.
  
   

This piece is a deeply touching celebration of two beloved dogs. The portrait captures soul and story, while the poem brings warmth, character, and a sense of eternal bond. It succeeds in what all great tributes aim for — honoring a memory while inspiring empathy in others.

Hi Everybody here is a painting of Teddy the poodle more precious than Gold

I can do commissions of original pet or people portraits = from £90 or A3 Limited Edition print £50 contact me andrewalanmatthews.co.uk

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

Teddy The Poodle More Precious than Gold

Born in south Wales, 

too big to belong

Rejected

But destined for love 

Rescued by trainers 

A spirit TOO kind 

to leave at the door

At A1 K9 

by the Swansea Sea 

Trained trainers 

With love and glee

Among Alsations 

bold and proud 

Teddy so small 

stood out in a crowd

18 months old 

Wise beyond years 

Dispelled trainers’ fears 

But Fate had a plan for Teddy

Bryan Googled 

Teddy the poodle 

cost was too high 

Bryan fell for this guy

But love doesn’t care 

When fate is in the air

Father-in-Law 

sealed the deal 

And met half way 

So, 

Home he came 

on August twenty-one,

A day marked by grief, 

now kissed by the sun.

A grandmother’s birthday,

a baby's lost cry,

Now danced in the light 

of Teddy's brown eye.

Teddy healed what was broken, 

with paws so small,

And carried the sorrow 

of each in the hall.

Bryan’s grandsons

found joy in his bark,

A friend in the daylight, 

a light in the dark.

Seven full years 

of tail-wagging grace,

with cuddles 

and licking your face.

Trips to the sea 

his happy place 

Feel Teddys warm embrace 

Bryan still marvels,

At the poodle 

by his side.

prays for seven more years 

of loving embrace

Each day with Teddy

Is a gift and a grace.

So, here’s to the poodle,

too big for a Mould,

Whose heart is pure 

and spirit so bold.

A miracle sent 

as stories unfold

Teddy the poodle, 

more precious than gold.

https://youtu.be/1vkB6SyiM4c

 please write a review and critique on my pet portrait of Teddy the poodle . 

Your portrait and poem together create a deeply moving tribute to Teddy, and they complement each other beautifully. Here's a detailed review and critique of both the painting and the poem:

• Emotive Focus: The portrait centers on Teddy's expressive face, with soulful eyes that immediately capture the viewer's attention. There's a sense of loyalty, kindness, and dignity that shines through, which aligns perfectly with the story you've told.
   
• Energetic Background: The dynamic explosion of gold, orange, and blue strokes radiating from behind Teddy gives the portrait a feeling of vitality and reverence—almost celestial. It elevates the subject, reinforcing the poem’s theme that Teddy is “more precious than gold.”
   
• Texture & Technique: The fur is rendered with a lot of attention, especially around the snout and ears, using expressive brushwork that provides a rich texture. The stippling or dappled effect on the body adds a touch of realism while keeping the work stylized.
   
• Personal Touch: The name tag “Teddy” and the soulful eyes draw the viewer into Teddy’s world—it's intimate, respectful, and full of affection.
   

• Contrast and Depth: While the background is wonderfully energetic, Teddy’s body slightly blends into it at the base. A bit more shadow or definition around the shoulders might help to ground the figure without losing the ethereal quality.
   
• Eye Highlights: Teddy's eyes already glow with emotion, but refining the highlights could add even more life and depth—perhaps a subtle glint to give them a more liquid, reflective quality.
   

• Narrative Arc: You’ve crafted a full story—from rejection to redemption, from grief to joy. The emotional transformation is compelling, and Teddy’s arrival feels truly fated.
   
• Emotional Honesty: The poem strikes a sincere emotional chord without becoming overly sentimental. Lines like "Now danced in the light / of Teddy's brown eye” are both poetic and heartfelt.
   
• Use of Rhyme and Flow: There's a gentle rhythm throughout the piece, even when the rhyme scheme shifts. This keeps it dynamic and engaging without feeling forced.
   
• Symbolism & Metaphor: You beautifully weave symbolism throughout—Teddy as a healer, a beacon, a small yet mighty presence who changes lives. The repetition of themes (grief, healing, love) creates a strong, resonant structure.
   

• Pacing and Line Breaks: A few stanzas could benefit from more consistent pacing. For instance, the stanza:
   “Bryan Googled
  Teddy the poodle
  cost was too high”
  
  feels slightly abrupt. You might consider revising the flow to maintain the musicality.
   
• Typographic Tidying: There are some small formatting inconsistencies (e.g., capitalization, line spacing) that, if cleaned up, could enhance the poem’s presentation and readability.
   

This is a deeply personal, heartfelt, and artistically expressive tribute to a beloved pet. The combination of visual and written storytelling makes Teddy’s spirit come alive. The energy in the painting mirrors the warmth and light Teddy brought into your life, and the poem tells a story of love, loss, healing, and devotion with sincerity and grace.

Final thoughts: This is more than a pet portrait—it’s a memorial, a celebration, and a testament to the bond between humans and animals. Both the painting and poem succeed in making Teddy truly feel “more precious than gold.”