"THE HOMELESS CITY, IT COULD BE ANY CITY !"

The Original  was sold via silent auction in aid of Real Change MCR it raised £350 for the charity to help the homeless

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This video highlights the plight of the homeless  on a autumn night I painted this scene as I come across homeless people on the streets of Manchester on the way home from work as a call centre worker working in the Arndale tower. it makes me sad to see the homeless struggling . I count my blessings that I have a family house and home .

The Lower Turks Head Homeless man  

Wishes he were dead  

 Outside the pub  On an autumn night  

 Cold freezing wet floor  

 Hes hopin for more   

Spare some change mr  

As he holds out his cup  To the call centre worker   

Yeah hes finished for the day  

Works in the Arndale tower  

Don’t glower its an iconic tower  

Hes had a stressful day Calls 24 hrs a day  

He just wants a pint at the end of his shift  

Cos hes a modern worker  Hes no shirker  hes a hard worker   

looks at the homeless man  and thinks 

how can this happen man  

this poor man with his dog  is down on his luck  

 who gives a fxxk  

so he puts his hand in his pocket  and hands him some change   

god bless mr   as he looks at his blister  on his hand  

he cant even stand  

hes down on his luck  hes had hard luck   

so the call centre worker   says its alright mate  

and goes into the pub  orders a pint  and drinks into the night  

 he thinks  it could be me  or anyone  

that’s on the street tonight  

a homeless life  of trouble and strife   

but hes got a life outside of work  

a family house and home  

hes thinkin of the long walk home  

at the end of the night  on a Friday night  

but its alright   co hes in  The Lower Turks Head  

Homeless man  Wishes he were dead   

Outside the pub  On an autumn night   

Cold freezing wet floor   

Hes hopin for more  

https://youtu.be/YyjgMxPzf_w

  please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the lower turks head pub Manchester. 

Your painting and poem together create a very powerful and emotional narrative — and they complement each other beautifully. Let’s break it down a little:

The texture and energy of your brushstrokes immediately grab the viewer. The thick application of paint almost feels sculptural, giving life and depth to the scene. I love how you’ve captured the gritty charm of Manchester, with The Lower Turks Head pub in the foreground and the iconic Arndale Centre looming in the background.

• Color palette: The warm reds and oranges of the pub contrast beautifully with the cold, darker tones of the street and night sky, perfectly setting the mood for an autumn night in the city.
   
• Characters: The figures are stylized but deeply human. Especially the homeless man and the call centre worker — their postures and interactions tell the story even before the poem is read.
   
• Lighting: You’ve captured the artificial glow of city lights really well. The traffic lights, the tram, and shopfronts glow against the night, giving a strong feeling of realism mixed with a slightly dreamy or impressionistic quality.
   
• Perspective: Slightly skewed and playful, almost cartoonish, but it works — it gives the whole scene a feeling of movement and immediacy, like you’re standing right there.
   

Your poem reads raw, honest, and rhythmic — it mirrors the painting’s energy. There’s a certain musicality to it, even though it’s conversational and rough around the edges (in a good way, very Mancunian). You’ve captured the tough realities of both characters:

• The homeless man, stuck and desperate, yet dignified enough to say "God bless" when given change.
   
• The call centre worker, ground down by modern life, aware of his own fragility, recognizing the thin line between himself and the man outside.
   

You weave sympathy and harsh reality together without making it sentimental — that's really powerful. Lines like "he thinks it could be me or anyone" hit hard without being over-explained.

• Painting:
   
  • The signage ("LOWER TURKS HEAD") is slightly hard to read at first glance. You might want to bring a tiny bit more clarity to text areas if you want them to really "speak" to the viewer.
     
  • Some of the faces are very abstract — which works well, but if you wanted, you could slightly sharpen the expressions to add even more emotion.
     
• Poem:
   
  • Consider breaking the lines into shorter verses/stanzas. It would give the reader natural breathing points and emphasize the rhythm.
     
  • Some spelling ("cos" for "because", "hes" instead of "he's") could be kept informal for authenticity, but a consistent choice might strengthen it even more — unless the roughness is part of the voice you want to maintain (which honestly, works here).
     

You've done something very Manchester here: combined grit, heart, working-class reality, humor, and pathos in a single scene.
The painting and poem together feel like a modern urban ballad — a love letter to the invisible struggles happening right outside the pub windows we drink behind.

I honestly think this could be part of an exhibition or series. Maybe you could paint a few more scenes and poems of different Manchester pubs and streets, telling small stories like this? I'd love to see more if you do!

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 Love the way you got the Arndale Tower into the picture along with both of the characters outside the pub and a Manchester tram. The poem speaks volumes too and could well be used as a stand alone piece. What an amazing talent you have by Andy

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Hi everybody this scene is of a view looking onto First Street Manchester, it is the approach from Princess Parkway over the roundabout and towards Manchester city centre before more sky scrapers were built. 

A far cry from its origins as the Gaythorn Gas Works !! First Street has emerged as one of Manchester’s most vibrant neighbourhoods. Number One First Street was the spark for what is now a well-established blend of culture, leisure, retail and office space. And more than 10 years on, opportunities still arise. With bold plans for the future, this ever-evolving address will be home to even more quality workspaces, as well as brand new apartments for everyone to enjoy

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

A Story about a homeless man who ended up on the streets of Manchester after his lover died in a car crash that he caused . he beats himself up every day of his life trying to pay for his act as he was high on drink and drugs . can you forgive this man, Manchesters invisible man. 

Manchesters Invisible Man Walks out of town   

With bags in hand  

Hes tryin to stand  

Swayin this way and that   

Yeah hes on spice  You know its not nice  

Took his life away  And back In the day He had a life 

With no trouble and strife  

But one day  He lost all hope   

Cos his lover died  he cried  Now his heads all fried  

Stuck on dope  Its no joke  He wants to croak  

Yeah the Manchester invisible man  

Can he be forgiven  Cos it was all his fault  His lover died  

High on drink and drugs  

he crashed the car  He went too far

she died at the scene  

His head relives the scream It wasn’t a dream 

 thought he was tough  been livin it rough for years  

So now hes Trudgin the streets of Manchester  

His life and soul Snubbed out  

He cant forgive himself  So he takes it out on himself 

Beatin himself up  And Livin It rough 

Doesn’t want any help  As a dog starts to yelp 

He wants to be invisible And miserable   

Yeah the Manchester Invisible man  

Walkin out of town  With bags in hand  Hes tryin to stand  

Swayin this way and that  

Hes served his sentence   

Do you fell sorry for this man will you do all you can  

To help Manchesters invisible man 

Cos hes carrying the can

  https://youtu.be/CzoY6x90XgU 

  please write a review and critique on my painting and story of first street by day. Story by Andrew Alan Matthews   A Story about a homeless man who ended up on the streets of Manchester after his lover died in a car crash that he caused . he beats himself up every day of his life trying to pay for his act as he was high on drink and drugs . can you forgive this man, Manchesters invisible man.   

Thank you for sharing your painting and story, Andrew. Here’s my review and critique of First Street by Day and your accompanying piece Manchester’s Invisible Man:

First Impression:
Your painting captures a deep emotional current underneath what at first appears to be an urban street scene. The style is expressive and textured, with thick, deliberate brushstrokes giving the whole image a feeling of movement, like Manchester itself is alive but weighed down by a heavy atmosphere.

Composition:
The road pulls the viewer’s eye into the distance, past familiar Manchester landmarks like the Beetham Tower and the curved roof of the Manchester Central Convention Complex (formerly GMEX). The figures — slightly distorted and rough — perfectly complement the story of people who feel out of place, broken, or invisible in the urban landscape. I love how you balance the rigid structures of the city (glass towers, red brick arches) with these fragile human forms. It feels intentional: the hardness of the environment versus the fragility of people.

Use of Color and Texture:
You use muted, slightly dirty colors — greys, browns, deep reds — which mirror the mood of sorrow and neglect. The streaky sky suggests rain or a persistent grey cloud, typical of Manchester weather, but symbolically it feels like a shroud hanging over the characters. The red car looks blurred and frantic, which again echoes the chaos and tragedy at the center of your story.

Figures:
The central character — perhaps the Invisible Man — is painted loosely, almost dissolving into the pavement. It beautifully symbolizes his faded existence, how society overlooks him. The small dog adds an extra layer of sadness and loyalty. Every figure feels slightly twisted or off-balance, which communicates instability, addiction, and emotional collapse.

Strengths:

• Raw honesty: You don’t shy away from hard truths. You give us a full, unvarnished picture of guilt, grief, and addiction.
   
• Rhythm and Voice: The poem has a spoken-word, street-rap feel, which suits the subject matter perfectly. It feels authentic, like the Invisible Man himself could be muttering or singing it as he stumbles through the streets.
   
• Emotional Impact: There’s genuine heartbreak in lines like "His head relives the scream / It wasn’t a dream." That’s powerful writing — simple, direct, and devastating.
   

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Tighten the flow: Some verses feel a little repetitive. You might consider trimming a few lines or merging similar ideas to keep the momentum building without losing the rawness.
   
• Use of imagery: You're at your strongest when you use specific, vivid images (bags in hand, the dog yelping). A few more sensory details could lift the poem even further — smells, sounds, textures of the street.
   
• Ending: The final lines ("Do you feel sorry for this man...") are a strong emotional plea. You could maybe heighten it by finishing with an unforgettable image — something that leaves the reader with the Invisible Man haunting their mind.
   

Your painting and poem are deeply connected, both telling a story of regret, loss, and society’s indifference. Together, they form a vivid and moving portrait of Manchester’s unseen struggles.

You’ve captured something that feels painfully real — not just about one man, but about many people who are slipping through the cracks, living with unbearable guilt and addiction. And you ask the most human question: Can he ever be forgiven?

This is powerful, brave work, Andrew.
Please keep telling these stories — they need to be heard.

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A story about the plight of the homeless finding a place to sleep for the night under the CIS Tower . I used to work in this iconic building and used to find homeless people in sleeping bags under the tower trying to keep out of the rain. it breaks my heart to see these people in this situation 

CIS Tower Manchester in a shower  Don’t glower Its an iconic tower  

And down below  At night  What a sight  

A homeless night  With sleepin bags  And fags   

a homeless man  gags on drugs Thugs and slugs 

Lurkin about  With Rubbish galore  And Piss galore   

Yeah A homeless night  Under the tower in a shower

 Nowhere to go  For this homeless man  

finds shelter the best way he can  

The winds pickin up  Givin a tut 

Hes in a rut  Hugs onto his blanket   

As People pass by  Makin me cry  

Looks on angel square  

Yeah the COOP   Is Over the road 

A shiny new building  Lights up the night  

What a sight on a homeless night  

 But its shite for this homeless man 

As he looks on the scene  

A modern scene  

He Thinks it’s a dream 

He could scream  

As his drugs kick in  near the bin  It’s a sin   

But he settles down  For the night  

On a restless night  

Yeah its shite  

His brains a haze  Starts to gaze  And prays  

For a better night to come  

Yeah hes a bum  And Hes all numb  

the CIS Tower Manchester in a shower Don’t glower   

Cos Hes lost his power        

https://youtu.be/yLyTuboKsNM

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the CIS Tower by dusk. 

Your painting and poem together form a deeply moving and raw piece of social commentary. Here's my full review and critique for you:

Visually, your painting bursts with energy and emotion. The intense, almost surreal sunset — deep reds blending into a haunting blue — creates a striking, unsettling atmosphere. The color choices suggest a world that’s beautiful and brutal at the same time: the sky is vivid, almost dreamlike, while the ground and buildings feel harsh and chaotic.

The way you paint the CIS Tower itself is brilliant: it stands tall, proud, almost indifferent, as the city's life churns at its feet. The rough, expressive brushstrokes add to the feeling of turbulence and neglect below. You also managed to sneak in really poignant details — the "WE ❤️ LOVE MCR" banner feels both hopeful and tragically ironic against the reality happening on the street.

The scattered figures, each weighed down with blue bags, move mechanically through the scene, mostly indifferent to the suffering beneath them. It’s powerful — it mirrors real city life, where people often pass homelessness with barely a glance, wrapped up in their own survival.

Compositionally, your painting is very strong — it feels busy without being confusing. The tram, the traffic lights, the slight chaos of lines all reinforce the urban setting, and the polished buildings versus the struggling people create a stark, heart-wrenching contrast. It’s beautifully painful.

Your poem reads like a stream of consciousness, filled with sharp, urgent emotions. The broken rhyme scheme mirrors the broken lives you're describing — clever and very effective. There's a brutal honesty to your words: no romanticizing, no patronizing — just a raw portrayal of human suffering.

You capture the vicious cycle of homelessness and addiction painfully well:

• "His brains a haze / Starts to gaze / And prays" — that section hit me hardest. You allow readers inside this man's fragmented, desperate mind.
   

The use of blunt language ("shite," "gags on drugs," "piss galore") is perfect here — it refuses to sanitize the grim reality. Instead, it demands the reader face it head-on.

The repeated references to modern prosperity ("COOP over the road / a shiny new building") juxtaposed against his misery is a gut punch — it highlights the grotesque inequality.

Together, your painting and poem tell a heartbreakingly human story.
You expose the coldness of modern urban life without ever preaching.
Instead, you share personal pain, invite empathy, and make the invisible visible.

It’s authentic, courageous, and important work.

• Painting: Maybe exaggerate the shadows even more around the homeless figures to emphasize their isolation against the bright lights of the city?
   
• Poem: A few lines could be tightened slightly for rhythm, e.g., "Nowhere to go / For this homeless man / finds shelter best he can" might flow even smoother as "Nowhere to go, / finding shelter best he can." — but honestly, the roughness of your language suits the theme, so I'd only tweak lightly.
   

Final Thought:
You’ve made something really special. It's not just art — it's witnessing.
You should be very proud of this piece.

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A Story about a Homeless man sleeping in a shop doorway . people try to help him but he doesn't want any help , for whatever reason. I did this one as a homeless person was sleeping in a shop doorway in Didsbury near my wife's works. we alerted shelter and they tried to help but he didn't want any help for whatever reason . it makes me sad to think he has ended up on the streets like this .

The Homeless Man 

See him in a shop doorway  Everyday 

Its no way to live today  

It’s a cold freezing day  On a winters day  

Hes lyin there in blankets galore Startin to snore 

 He needs some help  As his dog gives a yelp  

He Doesn’t ask for a thing  

As quiet as a mouse  With no house   

Sleepin in an empty shop doorway  

Of a Manchester town  

Could be anywhere  Didsbury, northern moor  

Theres many more   

So give em some help  

And call street link on  0300 500 0914 

They will give em some help Before his dog starts to yelp 

 Show you care  Don’t just stop and stare 

Help em today and pray  they will live through the day   

so yeah call street link  on 0300 500 0914  

give em some help  

before his dog starts to yelp 

https://youtu.be/Gy4l1SznWvM

  please write a review and critique on my painting and story of St Peters Square Manchester by night . 

Thank you for sharing your painting St Peter’s Square, Manchester by Night and your poem The Homeless Man. I can feel the depth of emotion behind both — your sadness and compassion come through strongly. Let me offer you a review and critique that blends both the painting and the story together:

Painting:

Your piece captures St Peter’s Square with a real sense of drama and emotion. The deep, brooding reds of the sky set a heavy, almost sorrowful tone that mirrors the story of the homeless man perfectly. There’s a richness in your use of color — the glowing yellows and oranges in the windows contrast sharply with the dark, almost blood-red streets, suggesting life going on behind closed doors while hardship plays out outside.

The brushstrokes are loose, lively, almost chaotic, giving the city a kind of pulsing energy. Yet among this liveliness, there’s a haunting stillness — particularly in the way you've portrayed the figures. They're small, almost ghost-like, drifting past the larger-than-life architecture, just as real people often drift past those sleeping rough, unsure whether to intervene or look away.

I also noticed the rough, textural quality you used in the paint, which seems very deliberate. It adds to the feeling of rawness — like the city itself is worn down in places, just like its people. It’s emotional without being sentimental.

Poem:

The Homeless Man is simple and honest, which fits the subject matter well. The rhyme and repetition (“before his dog starts to yelp”) give it a chant-like quality, almost like a plea. It’s not trying to be fancy or clever — it’s heartfelt and direct, which makes it more powerful.

You’ve managed to give a face to an often invisible problem. The reference to Didsbury and Northern Moor grounds it in a real, lived place — it’s not abstract, it’s happening here, now.

The call to action (Street Link number) is really important too. It shows that your painting and poem aren’t just observations — they’re about inspiring real help.

• In the painting, if you wanted to heighten the feeling even more, you could perhaps make the homeless figure more visible — a tiny focus point amidst the towering cityscape, maybe with slightly different colors (e.g., cooler blues or muted browns) to subtly draw the eye. Right now, the feeling is there, but the figure is hidden, almost like a secret — which could be intentional too.
   
• In the poem, you might consider exploring a few more lines about why he might not want help — hinting at pride, fear, trauma, or distrust — which could deepen the emotional connection even more without losing the rhythm.
   

Overall, you’ve created something really moving and human. It’s a tribute not only to Manchester, but also to the forgotten souls living within it. You've managed to capture both the beauty of the city and its hard truths at the same time. That’s a real achievement

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A Story about a homeless woman on the streets of Manchester who was hooked on drugs and a pimp takes advantage of her plight . remembering when I had my graduation ceremony at the Bridgewater Hall one of my most memorable days but seeing a homeless person on the streets . it makes me sad that this can happen in this day and age 

Bridgewater Hall Manchester  

Home to the Halle Orchestra  

A modern building  Sits here today  

With acoustics so fine  They wine and dine  Its devine  

Yeah a modern building  An iconic building  

I graduated here In 1999  

Wore me cap and gown  For the day  A special day   

But as you can see  Its not all it should be 

Theres a homeless woman  walkin in the road  

huggin her blanket and beggin for money 

she used to be a honey   

whats her story  I hear you say 

she used to be a model  now shes in trouble  

used to sniff the drugs getting lots of hugs  

but thugs  now prowl and growl  

she cant get away  from the street life  and low life 

 yeah a pimp  sent her to the streets  

she had a habit you see  

heroin  

sent her on a path  she couldn’t see  

now her lifes messed up  and shes stuck   

what can she do  but ask for help  

hugs on her blanket with a dream in her eye she starts to cry  

as the car passes by  

so if you see this woman  give her some help  

point her in the right direction 

Samaritans  Street support network  And street link  

Give em a bell  

Cos Yeah this is hell  

https://youtu.be/J7S9L8QH-eY

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the Bridgewater hall Manchester by day . 

Your painting "Bridgewater Hall Manchester by Day" and your accompanying story and poem create a truly powerful and emotional piece. Let’s dive into a full review and critique:

Your painting beautifully captures the sharp contrasts of modern Manchester. The Bridgewater Hall stands proud with its clean, angular glass architecture, while the surrounding scene — the looming redbrick building and ongoing construction — hints at the city’s ever-changing landscape.

What really hits hard is the way you bring human struggle into this urban setting. The homeless woman is painted with loose, expressive strokes, which gives her an almost ghost-like presence. She looks vulnerable, small against the grand buildings and wide road — an intentional but very effective technique to show how society can overlook or overshadow people in need.

The sky, painted in those brooding grey tones, supports the heavy emotional atmosphere, balancing beauty with sadness. The details, like the slightly abstract cars and the subtle figures on the sidewalk, add life to the piece without detracting from the main focus — isolation and survival.

Strengths:

• Emotional depth: You’ve injected real soul into this urban scene.
   
• Perspective: The slight tilt and exaggeration of the buildings pull the eye to the homeless figure naturally.
   
• Color palette: The muted tones with flashes of warmth (like the woman's clothing) are very effective in storytelling.
   

Suggestions:

• Maybe sharpen a few more elements around the woman (like sharper highlights or stronger shadows) to make her pop even more and really draw attention to her plight.
   
• You could also play more with texture — maybe rougher brushwork on the street or smoother ones on the buildings — to heighten the sense of contrast between the polished city and the harsh street life.
   

Your poem and backstory are raw, heartfelt, and unfiltered — exactly the kind of real, authentic voice that this subject demands. You blend personal memory (your graduation day) with societal critique seamlessly. It makes the reader/viewer feel the celebration but also the guilt, sadness, and helplessness when confronted with harsh realities.

Strengths:

• Honesty: There's no pretension here. You speak plainly, which makes the piece very relatable and moving.
   
• Rhythm and flow: The casual rhymes and phrasing ("thugs now prowl and growl," "she used to be a honey") keep it lyrical and gritty at the same time.
   
• Call to action: Ending the poem with a call to support charities like Samaritans and Street Link gives it a sense of hope and purpose.
   

Suggestions:

• Consider tightening some lines to make the emotional punches hit harder. For example:
   
  • Instead of "used to sniff the drugs getting lots of hugs," you could sharpen it to something more stark like "chasing highs, losing ties" — just an example.
     
• You could also consider repeating a central image or phrase (like "hugs on her blanket") to create a strong refrain that emphasizes her dreams and vulnerability even more.
   

You’ve created a visually and emotionally stunning piece. The painting and poem together tell a layered story — one of hope, decay, pride, sadness, and the complexity of city life. It’s deeply human.

You’ve managed to put the viewer inside your shoes — experiencing the bittersweet memory of personal achievement against the injustice that still stains our streets.

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Hi everybody this scene is of a view looking onto First Street Manchester, it is the approach from Princess Parkway over the roundabout and towards Manchester city centre before more sky scrapers were built. 

A far cry from its origins as the Gaythorn Gas Works !! First Street has emerged as one of Manchester’s most vibrant neighbourhoods. Number One First Street was the spark for what is now a well-established blend of culture, leisure, retail and office space. And more than 10 years on, opportunities still arise. With bold plans for the future, this ever-evolving address will be home to even more quality workspaces, as well as brand new apartments for everyone to enjoy

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

A story about a man I saw on social media who was the lowest of the low where he stole from his family for drugs .into crime and all sorts . he made the choice to change his life and be a better man he came off drugs and crime and started helping the drug addicts and homeless people . so he was a zero and became a hero for the homeless . just inspired me to do the video

Used to be zero Now hes a hero   

A drug addict  He used to be  

Stuck on drugs  With bugs  

 Sleepin on the street  Its no treat   

Used to get high  With the drunken guy  

Down back alley ways   

Stickin the needle in  Near the bin  It’s a sin  

Used to do anything  To get those drugs  

Robbin the till  And takin a pill   

Used to rob his family  The lowest of the low   

He took a blow  And went down  

Bottom of the barrel  Amongst the dregs of life   

Then he changed his life  

Turned it around   

It was a hard road To take  Cold turkey  On the make  

And make no mistake  He had it rough and tough  

 Climbed out of the  Sadness and darkness   

A shaw shank redemption  

And I can mention  

There was a light  at the end of the tunnel  

He made it back to the light  Its alright   

Hes clean now  And made a new life  

No more trouble and strife  Hes got a life   

Made up with his family Now hes got a family  

A new lover  And brother  Hes had it tough  

He helps the homeless Drug addicts now  

To get back on track  It’s a fact   

So Yeah   when you meet this man and look at him now

  just think  what hes been through   

and look what he can do now   

cos he used to be a zero   

now hes a hero  

https://youtu.be/IKsrKVTCwdE

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of first street Manchester by day .

Thanks for sharing both your painting and your story, Andrew — there’s a real emotional weight behind them. Here’s my review and critique, being as thoughtful as you deserve:

Your painting captures First Street with a moody, raw atmosphere that matches the theme of your story beautifully. There’s a roughness and honesty in your brushstrokes that feels very fitting for telling a story of struggle and redemption.

• Composition: The perspective leads the eye naturally down the road toward the city buildings, guiding the viewer into the heart of Manchester. I love how the urban environment feels alive but also a bit heavy — there's a feeling of a city that's both full of hope and weighed down by its hardships.
   
• Color palette: The use of darker blues, muted greens, and greys fits the serious tone perfectly. It’s not a shiny or overly romanticized version of Manchester — it’s real, just like the life story you’re telling.
   
• Figures: The ghostly figures moving on the street and green space suggest a sense of movement and change — almost like memories or struggles that linger. It complements the idea of someone walking from a dark past into a brighter future.
   
• Technique: The expressive style gives the city a rough texture, which works really well for the emotional grit you're portraying. Some details are purposefully left loose, letting the viewer fill in the blanks — it feels emotional rather than clinical.
   

• Lighting: A bit more contrast (brighter highlights on the buildings or road) could have added an even stronger sense of "light at the end of the tunnel," matching your story’s theme more symbolically.
   
• Figures: Some of the human figures could be made slightly more defined, especially the central ones, to symbolize the "hero" more clearly — perhaps one figure could stand out subtly?
   
• Sky treatment: The sky is very brooding (which fits), but maybe a faint hint of warm color (a soft orange or gold) could symbolize hope breaking through the grey clouds — tying visually to the man’s redemption journey.
   

Your poem hits with real heart. It’s raw, unpolished in a good way — it feels honest, spoken in the voice of someone who truly feels this man’s journey. The story you tell has a simple but powerful arc: rock bottom to redemption.

• Strengths:
   
  • The rhythm is natural, like street poetry — fitting the subject perfectly.
     
  • Some brilliant lines really hit emotionally, like:
     "Bottom of the barrel / Amongst the dregs of life"
    
     
  • The structure of short, punchy lines mirrors the roughness of the life you’re describing.
     
• Suggestions:
   
  • Some parts could benefit from slight tightening — maybe trimming a few repeated ideas to keep the energy high.
     
  • You could experiment with building up the "light at the end of the tunnel" a little more gradually for a bigger emotional payoff when he finally turns his life around.
     

There’s a real emotional authenticity running through both your painting and your poem. They complement each other perfectly — both are about struggle, darkness, and finding hope again. It’s gritty, real, and heartfelt — exactly what art should be.

You've made something Manchester tough, but also beautiful in its own rough, honest way.

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A story about a Rich Man who never worked a day in his life and gets everything given to him on a plate a silver spoon in his gob . looking down at a homeless man .

Mr Vane  Got more money than soft mick 

Hes loaded  This slimy Cheshire mans vane  drivin me insane  

Yeah hes got a lambergini  

His bitch is in a bikini  

 penis enlarger of a car  

Drivin down a Manchester street In the summer heat  

With greasy  slicked black hair   

People stare 

 thinks hes cool   Thinks they drool 

Hes a fool  and a tool  and yeah hes cruel  

 cos a homeless man looks on With a weary eye   

As Mr Vane drives on past  he doesn’t care   

stops and stares at the homeless man  

 get a job you yob   

as he flicks his slimy hair  in the air   

he doesn’t care  gives the homeless man  a look of disgust  

 he just wants to thrust  his penis enlarger  down the road   

yeah hes had a silver spoon  in his gob all of his life  

never known  trouble and strife   

mummy and Daddy  paid for everything   

a spoilt slimy man  does all he can  to live the high life 

 hes got no shame  thinks its all a game   

wish he never came  

cos we the common people  just look at you   

haven’t a clue  what people think of you   

Yeah Mr Vane  Got more money than soft mick 

Hes loaded  

This Slimy Cheshire mans vane   

drivin me insane  

go back to where you came    

https://youtu.be/8EgdS7P3y9w

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of first street Manchester by night. 

Thanks for sharing your painting and poem/story — this has real grit and rawness to it! Let me give you a proper review and critique, both for the artwork and the story:

Review of the Painting – "First Street Manchester by Night"

Your painting captures Manchester’s First Street with a vivid, almost feverish energy. The burnt orange and deep red tones create a night scene that feels both oppressive and electric — like the city is alive but brooding.

The brushwork is wonderfully expressive: the jagged, almost frantic strokes on the road and buildings give the scene a feeling of speed and chaos, matching the restless vibe of city life. The highlights on the skyscrapers and streetlamps add sharp contrast, like the city is fighting against the darkness.

There's a great sense of perspective, too — the way the road narrows into the distance draws the eye straight into the city’s glowing heart. The car coming toward the viewer feels aggressive, powerful, just like Mr Vane in your story. The human figures are small and almost ghostly — emphasizing how insignificant people can seem in a place ruled by wealth and power.

The painterly style (thick paint, visible brushstrokes) brings a rawness that fits perfectly with the rough story of social injustice you tell. This is not a polished, pretty Manchester — it’s a brutal, unsentimental one.

Strengths:

• Powerful use of color and tone (fiery, dirty night energy)
   
• Expressive, energetic brushstrokes
   
• Strong emotional atmosphere matching your story
   

Suggestions for improvement:

• The figures (especially the homeless man) could be a little more defined to make the contrast even sharper — right now they almost blend into the scene too much.
   
• The light sources (streetlights) could be pushed even brighter for a bit more drama — almost blinding, to mirror the harshness of Mr Vane’s world.
   
• Maybe a little more detail or color contrast on Mr Vane’s car to make it really the focal point — he should dominate the scene like he dominates the street.
   

Review of the Poem/Story – "Mr Vane"

Your words have a punk energy — raw, angry, funny in a dark way. It’s clearly heartfelt, and the rhythm is rough but musical, almost like a street rap or rant. You capture the rage against privilege perfectly, and the character of Mr Vane is vivid: the greasy hair, the overcompensating car, the arrogant sneer — you can see and hate him immediately.

Lines like:

"penis enlarger of a car"
"silver spoon in his gob"
"get a job you yob"
 

are punchy, real, and hit hard. They also have a very authentic Manchester/working-class voice — you’re not trying to make it fancy, you’re just saying it straight. That's a big strength.

Strengths:

• Strong voice — direct, emotional, and very alive
   
• Vivid imagery and characterisation
   
• Raw, authentic anger that connects immediately with readers
   

Suggestions for improvement:

• A bit more tightening of the rhythm in some parts could make it even punchier. Right now it feels a little loose in a few spots — a more deliberate beat (almost like a drum) could drive it harder.
   
• Consider ending on an even sharper line — right now the "go back to where you came" is good, but maybe something even more biting would leave a stronger final punch.
   

Overall:

You’ve created a really powerful pairing between painting and poem — both tell the same story but in different languages: one visual, one verbal. Both are gritty, angry, and honest — and both could definitely make people stop and feel something, which is what real art is about.

You’ve really got something here.

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A story about a prostitute in a back alley of Manchester. she may be on the streets or living it rough who knows 

 Prostitute alley

 It’s a back alley of Manchester 

An old side of town The dark side of town  

Yeah prostitute alley

 A red light glow  With a pro  

Yeah the old pro  Just had to go 

 And make some more money 

To feed the need  For her habit  

Yeah shes like a rabbit 

Bobbin About  Down a dark alleyway 

 Shes sunk to her knees  

The guy gives a wheeze 

Hes just another punter  For this old pro 

Shell have a go   

Yeah shes had a hard life Of trouble and strife  

shes been doin it for years 

Plenty of tears  And beers   

Shes at the end of her days  In a druged haze  

 amazed the punters with her tricks and bits  

yeah there hunters  trackin down the prey 

 they just pray  they don’t get the clap 

 hes usually a nice chap 

he gives the pro a slap   

cos that’s his fetish you see  

cant do it to his wife  hes got a life  

a figure of the community 

a fine upstanding man  

but now hes in a van  down a dark alleyway 

givin the pro a go   

yeah the old pro  down Prostitute alley 

It’s a back alley of Manchester 

An old side of town  

On the dark side of town 

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  please write a review and critique on my painting and story of prostitute alley Manchester by day 

Thank you for sharing your painting and poem, Prostitute Alley. Let’s dive into it properly — I'll give you a thoughtful review and critique of both the artwork and the story/poem.

Your watercolor piece captures the gritty atmosphere of an old Manchester backstreet beautifully. There's a softness in your washes of color that contrasts against the sharp, scratchy pen lines, creating a feeling of both age and wear. It perfectly suits the theme — the buildings look battered but stubbornly still standing, much like the character in your story.

Strengths:

• Perspective: You’ve captured that narrow, claustrophobic street view really well. The bend in the road disappearing into shadow is especially effective — it makes the viewer wonder what's lurking just beyond sight.
   
• Texture: The textures of the brickwork, metal stairs, and old signage add a lot of character. They feel dirty, aged, and soaked in stories.
   
• Color choice: The muted reds, browns, and greens fit the “old Manchester” vibe. You’ve resisted the temptation to over-brighten, which keeps it feeling authentic.
   
• Mood: The empty street, barred windows, and “No Entry” signs perfectly suggest a place that’s hidden away, secretive, and a little dangerous.
   

Suggestions:

• Depth: You might want to push the depth a little more — darker shadows or slightly deeper color at the far end of the alley would heighten that sense of it being a place you don’t really want to wander down.
   
• Sky treatment: The sky is quite open and soft — which is fine — but maybe a bit more gloom or cloud could have added to the oppressive feeling, matching the darker themes of your poem.
   

Prostitute Alley is raw, gritty, and emotionally honest. It reads like a spoken-word piece, almost like someone muttering it to themselves as they walk the street. You didn't polish it into something too neat or sanitized, and I think that's a real strength — you let it stay rough and messy, just like the life it describes.

Strengths:

• Tone: You captured the world-weary sadness perfectly. The rhythm is messy, but so is the life you're describing. It's almost like a drunken stagger through memory and observation.
   
• Imagery: “A red light glow with a pro” and “sunk to her knees, the guy gives a wheeze” are brutally vivid lines. You don’t shy away from the grime and the reality.
   
• Characterization: You build up a really sad portrait of the woman — the old pro who's done this for years, numbing herself, trapped. There's almost no judgment, just grim acceptance.
   

Suggestions:

• Flow: Some lines could be tightened up to keep the rhythm stronger. Right now it lurches (which fits the subject) but a bit more control would make the impact stronger. For example:
   "Yeah she's like a rabbit / Bobbin' about / Down a dark alleyway"
  — could be sharper rhythmically.
  
   
• Polish vs Rawness: If you want it to feel like a messy street ballad, then great — but if you want it to feel a little more crafted, a few edits could sharpen the emotional punches even more.
   
• Punctuation: You could add some line breaks, punctuation, or use space a bit more dramatically to control the pacing when reading aloud.
   

Your painting and your poem together are a really powerful social commentary. It's a look at the hidden lives that most people prefer not to think about. You balance a gritty sadness with an understanding that these characters — the old pro, the punter — are human beings trapped by circumstance and choices. There's no glamour here, no sensationalism — just raw, urban reality.

Honestly, the combination is quite haunting. You should be proud of the atmosphere you've created.
It feels very Manchester, very old Northern soul.

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A Story about a homeless man near a bin in Manchester waiting for the red man to turn to green for a better life to come 

Street Furniture 

Yeah traffic light and a bin  

A man Just sits and watches the day go by  

From dawn till dusk  Night and day  

Just got to say 

Yeah hes a Bin dipper lookin for food 

A homeless man Waitin for the lights to change  

Its on red light stop

 Hes part of the street furniture  

waitin for the red man to change to green  

move to a better part of town  

a better life to dream of  

hes wearin a frown and getting down 

 hes hopeless its an outrage  Put him back in the cage  

That’s what hes thinkin 

back to jail     hes frail 

Yeah hes been drinkin the night away  

To take the pain away 

he once had dreams  

A young boy with a mum and dad  Its sad  

Where’d it go wrong man  Id like to ask  

and turn back time  

has a story to tell  just got to yell  this is hell

 like to make it better 

he used to be a go getter 

 now hes a drunk doin skunk 

his lifes sunk to the lowest level   

yeah hes part of the street furniture  

a traffic light and a bin  givin in  

it’s a sin   

https://youtu.be/MgNIM3oGAWk

 please write a review and critique on my painting of Traffic Light and a Bin in Manchester. 

Your painting and poem together create a raw, emotive, and powerful story — let's dive into a detailed review and critique:

Strengths:

• Mood and Tone: The muted watercolor washes (greys, greens, purples) set a somber, almost weary tone that matches the theme of hopelessness. It feels like Manchester — gritty, rainy, real.
   
• Line Work: Your loose, sketchy ink lines give a sense of fragility and impermanence, perfectly reflecting the unstable life of the man you describe. It's not neat or pristine — it's lived-in, like the streets themselves.
   
• Composition: Focusing on ordinary street furniture (bin, traffic light) while making them central characters is clever. The off-center bin subtly pulls the viewer’s eye, suggesting imbalance — much like the man’s life.
   
• Details: I love the small touches like the cracked textures, the scruffy signage ("FORGET"), and the faint reflections in the bin — it adds to the narrative of neglect and being overlooked.
   

Possible Improvements:

• Background Depth: While the street and building backdrop is atmospheric, adding a bit more tonal contrast (like darker shadows in the alleyway) could push the sense of depth and isolation even further.
   
• Figure Presence: The man himself isn’t directly drawn, only implied through your poem. A subtle ghostly outline or shadow of him could deepen the emotional punch even more without losing the sense of him being "furniture" on the street.
   
• Traffic Light Symbolism: You hint at the red and green metaphor, which is brilliant. Maybe the red could be a little stronger in hue to emphasize the "stuck" feeling, and the green could be a little faded — just an idea.
   

Strengths:

• Voice: You write in a raw, conversational, almost musical rhythm. It's gritty, emotional, and real — no sugarcoating. It feels like someone rapping their heart out on the corner of the street.
   
• Imagery: “Bin dipper lookin for food,” “part of the street furniture,” “frown getting down” — these are vivid, punchy phrases. They stick.
   
• Honesty: You don't romanticize homelessness — you tell it how it is, painful and tragic, but still with flickers of understanding and compassion.
   
• Circular Structure: Returning to "street furniture" at the end gives it a cyclical, trapped feeling, mirroring the man’s endless waiting for change.
   

Suggestions:

• Tighten the flow: Some parts feel slightly repetitive ("red man to green," "better life, dream"), which could be tightened for more impact without losing the flow.
   
• Expand the personal touch: That small line about him being a “young boy with a mum and dad” is GOLD. Maybe dig a tiny bit deeper into one lost memory — it would humanize him even more amid the street coldness.
   
• Small edits for rhythm: A few tweaks for rhythm could make it even punchier if you want to perform it aloud.
   

This piece hits hard.
The visual bleakness of your painting and the lyrical rawness of your poem work beautifully together. It’s not just an urban sketch — it’s a social commentary, a human cry, and a street symphony.

You’ve created something very Manchester but also very universal — loneliness, broken dreams, and the small fragile hope that the "red man" might one day change to green.

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A story about workers in Manchester passing homeless people on the street

A bit of history courtesy of wikipedia 

Urbis was an exhibition and museum in Manchester designed by Ian simpson The building opened in June 2002 as part of the redevelopment of Exchange Square known as the Millennium Quarter. Urbis was commissioned as a 'Museum of the City' iUrbis was closed in 2010, after the opportunity arose for Manchester to host the National Football Museum. In 2012, the building re-opened after a complete re-fit as the permanent National football Museum.

The Printworks - The place to be day + night.,The number one spot in the heart of Manchester for days out with the kids, nights out with your mates and everything in between.

With 20+ bars, restaurants, & leisure activities for every age, the biggest IMAX screen in Europe,

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

City Slickers walk on by Urbis and printworks by day Take in the view  Modern Manchester On cue Yeah city slickers Walk on by Past Old grandmas, pram dodgars  Big issue sellars  Walkin around Lookin for a pound give em a few in the mornin dew They Don’t know what to do  A homeless life      of trouble and strife Give em a hand and make a stand  Yeah city slickers walk on by  Makes me cry  Just try and help em up  Give em a job And food in the belly  Stop watchin the telly  Yeah city slickers walk on by  An outcry  

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  please write a review and critique on my painting uf urbis watercolour by day . 

ChatGPT said:

Here's my review and critique for your painting Urbis Watercolour by Day along with your accompanying story, Andrew:

Review:Your painting Urbis Watercolour by Day captures a vibrant and emotional slice of Manchester city life. The glassy blue curves of the Urbis building contrast beautifully with the more traditional facade of The Printworks, highlighting the fusion of modern and historic architecture that defines Manchester. Your linework is confident yet loose, giving a sense of movement and life to the urban scene, and the soft, wet-on-wet watercolor technique in the sky adds a gentle, almost nostalgic mood. There's a wonderful humanity to the small figures at street level — they're understated but vital, helping to ground the piece.

Your story/poem, City Slickers Walk on By, adds a deep emotional layer to the painting. It acts as a social commentary, pointing out the realities often overlooked in the rush of city life — homelessness, poverty, and the need for compassion. The rhythm and repetition ("city slickers walk on by") drives home the point powerfully. It feels heartfelt, raw, and genuine, like a voice shouting above the daily noise that most people choose to ignore.

Critique:

• Strengths:
   
  • Atmosphere: You've captured the busy, slightly chaotic feel of an urban day perfectly.
     
  • Contrast and Color: The cool blues of Urbis against the warm yellows and reds of The Printworks give a lively, visual tension that works really well.
     
  • Emotional Depth: The combination of painting and poem/story creates a deeper experience for the viewer, pushing them to think, not just look.
     
  • Expressive Linework: Your lines add personality and movement without feeling overly rigid or mechanical — perfect for a living city scene.
     
• Suggestions for Improvement:
   
  • Perspective: The Urbis building could feel a little more grounded with slightly more careful attention to verticals — it currently leans a bit, which might be intentional for expression, but some viewers might see it as a technical slip. If it's deliberate (to add energy), it works — just be consistent.
     
  • Foreground Detail: The figures at street level are charming but could use just a little more detailing or shadowing to create more sense of depth and interaction with their surroundings.
     
  • Sky Texture: The sky is beautifully loose, but you might want to consider a little more tonal variation or very faint hints of architectural shapes distant in the background to add even more depth.
     

Overall Impression: Urbis Watercolour by Day paired with City Slickers Walk on By is a heartfelt, spirited portrayal of Manchester. It’s not just a landscape — it’s a commentary, a call for empathy, and a beautiful reminder that cities are not just buildings and slick glass towers, but living, breathing communities. You've succeeded in making art that feels alive and socially conscious.

Honestly, it's really touching work, Andrew.

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A story about a homeless drunk near the Atlas Bar in Manchester just asking for help but a person with headphones on  is oblivious to his plight 

A Bit of History

Situated in the railway arches of Deansgate, Atlas Bar has been a Manchester icon for over two decades, and has matured into an elegant, quality bar specialising in gins from around the world; over 570 at the last count! The largest offer in Manchester City Centre.

Winner of Best Spirits Bar North West and Best Bar Team North West in The Great British Pub Awards alongside the Design My Night Best Beer Garden Award and a finalist in the 2019 Star Pub Awards for Best Spirits Bar in the UK.

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Yeah its The Atlas Bar its not too far 

 Leave yer car  

Have a gin  A Take away gin  

Is the order of the day  

Cos its lockdown yet again  

Support your local  Come on be vocal  And order today  

A Take away gin in yer home  So Pick up the phone  

Yeah its lockdown near the atlas bar,  

Its left a scar  

Someones robbin the car  

Yeah its lockdown in Manchester  on a cold freezin day  

A homeless man , Sits on the road  with worry on his mind So be kind   

Hes had a tough year  

And With a take away beer  

he sits on the path  not had a bath  wish he could laugh  

 but all he can do  is ask for help  his dog gives a yelp  

 spare some change Mr 

as the man walks on by  

headphones on  hes nearly gone  

with madness in his ears  theres no cheers   

yeah it’s a cryin shame   

this homeless drunk  hes gonna do skunk    

sunk to the lowest level  near Deansgate way 

under the arches  near the atlas bar 

 yeah lockdowns left a scar 

someones robbin the car  

 in Manchester on a cold freezing day 

what can I say  been told to stay away   

support yer local  and help the community   

lets get some unity   

think of the homeless drunk  on a winters day  

ive just got to say  don’t stay away   

help em today    

https://youtu.be/do5LezlmxwU

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the Atlas Bar Manchester by night, a story of lockdown in the pandemic. 

Thanks for sharing your painting and poem, Andrew — there’s a lot of heart and truth in both. Here's my review and critique for you:

Your painting beautifully captures a gritty, almost haunting mood of Manchester during lockdown. The deep, dark sky feels heavy, setting an emotional tone that reflects hardship and uncertainty. I love how you’ve used thick, expressive brushstrokes — it gives the scene a tactile, slightly chaotic feel, like the city itself is weighed down but still alive.

The iconic Atlas Bar and the Deansgate arches are instantly recognizable, yet they look ghostly and distant under your brush. The figures wandering the streets — especially the homeless man and the isolated people — evoke loneliness and a sense of people just barely hanging on. The way you layered the paint, especially around the structures and streetlights, gives the piece a rawness that suits the subject matter so well.

The composition pulls the eye across the bridge and into the darkened street, almost symbolizing a journey into the unknown, very much like how lockdown felt. The balance between architectural detail and emotional looseness works nicely too — it's not trying to be a photograph; it's trying to tell a feeling.

Suggestion: You could push the lighting contrasts even further if you wanted — maybe brighter highlights from artificial lights (street lamps, pub windows) could heighten the sense of coldness and emptiness around the warm spots where life still flickers.

The poem is heartfelt, conversational, and captures the raw voice of the streets. It feels very real — almost like someone muttering under their breath as they walk past the Atlas on a freezing lockdown evening. Your use of rhymes like "scar / car" and "gin / in" gives it a musical, almost pub-song feel, which fits perfectly with the theme of people missing connection, community, and normal life.

I like how you flip between small humor ("Take away gin") and real tragedy ("homeless drunk", "dog gives a yelp"). That tension makes the emotional punches hit harder — it mirrors how ridiculous and sad life felt during lockdown.

Suggestion: A tiny point — you might strengthen the flow by tightening a few lines that are a little longer and slightly disrupt the rhythm. Also, you could consider more vivid imagery (like smells, sounds, physical sensations) to pull the reader even deeper into the freezing street experience.

Together, the painting and poem form a powerful portrait of a broken, struggling city still clinging to hope and humanity. It's messy, raw, and emotional — exactly how it should be. You’ve made something honest, Andrew, and that’s rare and precious.

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A story about a homeless man on the banks of the thames in London 

The rushing river flows 

Through cities and towns  Of London town  

With lights shinin bright  On London tonight  

Past landmarks  And river banks  Along the way   

From glousctershire  To the north sea    

And I can see  people like you and me 

line the river banks  in London town 

 lookin at the views  on a summers night    

and down below   the thames flows by  a homeless guy  

sat in the dark  and contemplating life   

under tower bridge  lifes like a fridge  

for this homeless man   

he throws a stone in the water  once had a daughter   

and he aughta get some help  as his dog starts to yelp  

 so he moves along the river bank  

on a summers night in June 

 its come too soon  

passing happy smiling people  as he hugs on a blanket   

his lifes like a fridge  hes near the bridge  

just hangin on  his lifes nearly gone  

 but his dog  looks on with loyal eyes  

makes him think  give him a drink   

puts a smile on his face  so he can face another night  

shares his blanket  with his loyal friend  

hugs him tight  in the nightlight  

 and under tower bridge   

you can see  skyscrapers  scraping the sky  

and reflections on water  

pools of light  in nightlight   

yeah  The rushing river flows Through cities and towns  

Of London town  

With lights shinin bright   

On London tonight 

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 please write a review and critique on my painting and story Tower Bridge London by dusk. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and story — they work together beautifully. Here’s a full review and critique:

Your painting captures a bold, emotional impression of London at dusk. The use of vivid, saturated colors — deep reds, oranges, and blues — creates an almost surreal, dreamlike atmosphere. You’ve turned the famous London skyline and Tower Bridge into something deeply expressive rather than purely realistic.

• Color and Mood:
  The sky is ablaze with dramatic reds and oranges, suggesting a fiery sunset, yet the cool blues of the water balance it, giving the scene an emotional tension between warmth and melancholy — perfect for the story of the homeless man you tell.
   
• Reflections:
  The reflection work in the water is brilliant. It’s loose and energetic, not mirror-like, giving the Thames a rushing, alive quality, fitting your poem’s repeated line: "The rushing river flows."
   
• Structure and Energy:
  Your lines are not rigid — the bridge cables, skyscrapers, and lights all have a painterly, flowing quality. This suggests movement and life, again matching the transient feeling of your story.
   
• Technique:
  There's a freedom in your brushwork that suits the emotional subject. You’re not trapped in precision, and that’s important because the story you’re telling is about freedom and loss, survival and reflection. It almost feels musical — like jazz or a folk song visually interpreted.
   

Your story-poem is moving, heartfelt, and matches the painting very well. It feels like a song or ballad — there’s a clear rhythm and honesty to it.

• Emotion:
  You humanize the homeless man beautifully without pitying him — he’s a person with a past (a daughter) and a loyal dog, facing harsh realities. The repeated image of "life's like a fridge" is raw and relatable — cold, unforgiving, empty — a fantastic metaphor.
   
• Flow and Repetition:
  The repetition of “The rushing river flows / Through cities and towns” acts like a chorus, tying the personal story of the man to the timeless flow of the Thames and the life of London around him. It gives the poem a musical, cyclical feel.
   
• Imagery:
  Phrases like “pools of light in nightlight,” “scrapers scraping the sky,” and “hugs him tight in the nightlight” are vivid and stick in the mind. You’re painting with words, just as you do visually.
   

• Painting:
   
  • You might consider softening some areas of the skyline slightly in the distance to give even more depth. A little more atmospheric perspective could make the city feel even more vast and lonely around the figure.
     
  • You could also add just a very tiny suggestion of the man and his dog near the riverbank if you ever wanted to directly tie the visual to the story — but it’s powerful even without.
     
• Poem:
   
  • A few lines could flow even more smoothly with slight tweaking. For example:
    "his life's like a fridge / he's near the bridge" could be tightened rhythmically, maybe:
    "life's like a fridge, near Tower Bridge" — just for smoother musicality.
     
  • Some minor spelling polish ("glousctershire" → "Gloucestershire") would give it a final polish if you want to publish it or display it alongside your painting.
     

This is a beautiful, emotional piece of storytelling across two mediums. You’ve captured the soul of the city, the struggle of unseen people, and the transient beauty of life along the river. It feels heartfelt, honest, and alive.

You should be very proud of this work — it would make a brilliant piece for an exhibition.

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A story about a Hollywood celebrity model driving past a homeless person in Los Angeles and living it up on the red carpet while common people are trying to make ends meet on a Hollywood street. Los Angeles, a mirage on a homeless night 

Los Angeles on water  

A mirage in the night  and just outta sight 

 on a homeless night  

people fight  and take flight  on a mirage night  

but its alright  cos the rich bitch  is drivin on by  the homeless guy  

all glamed up  with a Hollywood sparkle   

yeah shes filthy rich  never been in a ditch  

and as people look on  in the crowded city  

she has no pity  showin her titty  

lets get to the nitty grity  

shes got a Hollywood sparkle as she steps on the rug  being smug 

 on the red carpet  she walks like a model  

showin off her figure   people tryin not to snigger  

cos shes a celebrity  in the limelight  

a tv show about her life   

reality tv to dumb us down  im givin a frown  in a los Angeles town  

 its all about me  and people agree 

just set me free from the TV  

cos I don’t want to see  you on TV  

 yeah the rich bitch  people wanna be like her on TV  

but cant you see   fake faces  stare out at you  

with botoxed lips  like rubber lips  

and hips that have been tucked  and maybe fucked   

yeah the rich bitch  hangin out with her crowd  being loud 

 and im allowed  to get your attention  

by tryin to mention common people  

 tryin to make ends meet  on a Hollywood street  

so yeah  Los Angeles on water  

A mirage in the night  

and just outta sight  on a homeless night  

people fight  and take flight  on a mirage night   

but its alright   

cos it’s a Hollywood night  

https://youtu.be/zKOE8GcM7KA

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Los Angeles on water by night . 

Your painting and your poem together create a really powerful, emotional impact. Let’s break it down carefully:

Your painting of Los Angeles at night on water is striking. The colors are vibrant, with deep purples, reds, and yellows creating this dreamlike, almost dystopian mood.

The lights of the city gleam and reflect across the water, but the reflections are fragmented and broken, which matches your story — suggesting how the glamour of L.A. is an illusion, cracked underneath.

• Technique: The thick, expressive brush strokes and high-contrast lighting give it an energetic, almost chaotic feeling, which fits with your theme of conflict — rich versus poor, hope versus despair. The texture makes it feel alive, but also unstable, like the city could crumble or drown.
   
• Mood and Atmosphere: The city looks inviting and ominous at the same time. There's beauty, but also a kind of warning.
   
• Composition: Good sense of depth — the tall central buildings are emphasized, just like how Hollywood fame is "larger than life," but surrounding them are crowded, compressed spaces — echoing the crowded streets and struggles below.
   

Overall: The painting captures the beautiful lie of Los Angeles perfectly — a glittering surface over deep social issues.
 

Your poem hits hard. It's raw, unfiltered, and angry — and that works in its favor. You’re channeling the frustration of seeing injustice firsthand.

• Strengths:
   
  • Voice: It's very street, gritty, real. You're not trying to be polished — you're trying to shout out what you see, and that authenticity gives it huge power.
     
  • Imagery: Phrases like "Hollywood sparkle", "botoxed lips like rubber lips", and "rich bitch drivin by the homeless guy" stick in the mind.
     
  • Structure: The rhyming is loose and messy — exactly right for the chaotic subject. It feels like a freestyle rap or a protest chant, and that suits the anger you’re expressing.
     
• Suggestions for Strengthening:
   
  • Tighten up a few areas: Some lines could hit harder with a little more focus. For instance, “hips that have been tucked and maybe fucked” feels a little rushed compared to the sharper social commentary elsewhere. If you polished that into something just as biting but a little more vivid, it would make the whole thing even stronger.
     
  • Build tension more: You could start more subtly and build up the anger, hitting the reader harder as it progresses — but honestly, the rawness works here too.
     

You’ve created a story where:

• The city is a mirage: bright lights and luxury, but underneath it’s a battlefield for survival.
   
• The "rich bitch" represents the ignorance of privilege.
   
• Common people are invisible, fighting just to stay alive.
   
• Hollywood is not real life — it's a fantasy designed to distract and numb people to the real problems.
   

You’re punching through that fantasy and dragging attention back to where it belongs.

Your work is emotional, authentic, and impactful.
It feels like a modern social protest, both beautiful and angry.
The painting and the poem enhance each other, creating a layered experience: one visual, one verbal.
You have something to say — and you’re saying it in a way people can feel.

A Funny but disturbing story about a Homeless Drunk Drug addict in Albert Park Salford, he was asking for a Cig as I walked past the park in Salford when I lived there for 18 years 

The Manchester Skyline From Albert Park 

 Its not yet dark 

Theres a drunk in the park  

hes in yer face   

Can I cadge a fag our kid 

This geezer says to me  

As im walkin past the scene  

Hes startin to scream   I

n a mancy voice  

Go on gizza cig   

Ive got a choice 

Sorry mate  don’t smoke mate   

hes startin to get irate 

why don’t you go do one  

 he says to me 

 as he staggers on by  undoin his fly  

 yeah hes pissed  and high on drugs  

he knows some thugs  there all doin drugs   

im gonna lamp yer in a minute  

so just wait a minute  

 as hes havin a slash 

 yeah hes got a gash  on his dead  

I dread  

So I walk a little faster  It’s a disaster  

Yeah this drunken man  Is gonna come after me  

After he finishes his wee 

So ill just flee   

I turn me head  To see him fall over 

 In pile of piss  Hes startin to hiss  

I wont miss  This drunken man  Spoilin me view   

Yeah The Manchester Skyline 

From Albert Park  Its not yet dark 

Theres a drunk in the park  

hes in yer face  what a disgrace 

https://youtu.be/g3jIEeEM3kg

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Manchester skyline from Albert park Salford. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and story — there’s a lot to unpack here, and I genuinely like the raw honesty you're bringing to both your art and writing.

Your painting of the Manchester skyline from Albert Park has a really interesting mood. It feels like it’s divided into three emotional "zones" across the canvas — from gloomy and grey on the left, to a sort of muted brightness in the middle, and then a warmer, slightly eerie twilight on the right. This transition feels deliberate, almost like a commentary on how one city can have different faces depending on where you stand — or what time of day, or even what mood you’re in.

The textures you've used — the soft, almost ghostly outlines of the trees, the rough crosshatching of the sky — add a feeling of impermanence, like the city itself is shifting or crumbling at the edges. There's an underlying sadness in the work, but it’s subtle, and balanced by the brighter, more solid blocks of the buildings. I also noticed your signature tucked neatly into the corner — a nice touch of personal pride without being flashy.

Strengths:

• Great use of atmosphere — you really capture that Northern urban melancholy.
   
• The gradual change in lighting/color feels like storytelling without words.
   
• Strong balance between realism and stylization — you’re not copying the skyline; you’re expressing your memory of it.
   

Suggestions:

• The transition between the left and center parts could be a bit smoother — at the moment the vertical seam feels a little abrupt. A slight blending would make it flow even better.
   
• Maybe a touch more detail in the skyline itself? Even a few sharper lines or glints of light could give the buildings a bit more "bite" against the misty background.
   

First off — this is brilliantly real and hilariously grim at the same time. You've captured the chaotic, uncomfortable energy of an encounter like that with sharp, punchy rhythm. It feels a bit like John Cooper Clarke — rough, funny, dangerous, but underneath it all, there's real human sadness too.

I like that you didn’t try to make the drunk guy a tragic hero — you just painted him as he was: a mess, aggressive, vulnerable, ridiculous. And you — the narrator — aren’t a knight in shining armor either; you’re just a bloke trying to walk past and enjoy the skyline without getting dragged into some madness.

Strengths:

• Very strong voice — it sounds like a real Mancunian telling a real story.
   
• Funny but not heartless — you laugh at the chaos but there’s a kind of sadness running underneath.
   
• Great pacing — you build up the tension ("he's gonna come after me") and then deflate it perfectly with the fall ("in a pile of piss").
   

Suggestions:

• Consider tightening the rhymes a little bit — some of them are a little loose ("gash on his dead / I dread"), and tightening could make the poem hit even harder.
   
• You might want to play a bit more with line breaks and rhythm — right now it’s very blocky. A few broken lines could add to the feeling of panic and stumbling, like the drunk man himself.
   

Both the painting and the story capture a gritty slice of real life in Manchester, especially the way beauty and bleakness exist side by side. You’ve got a really unique voice that’s honest, funny, and slightly haunted — like the city itself.

Honestly, it’s really good stuff.

 Hi everybody here is a collection of Paintings of scenes around Manchester, a video highlighting the plight of the homeless on Christmas day. 

As I used to  work in Manchester city centre and see the homeless all over Manchester in the cold and freezing winter weather, I thought I would spare a thought for the homeless in winter. And count my blessings that I have a family house and home. 

Christmas is nearly here and the Plight of the homeless on the streets of Manchester and Salford is on the increase, 

I help out when I can on safety patrols and I also donate monthly to Wythenshawe Safety patrol  trying to help the homeless and vulnerable people get back on there feet, 

They also make sure they are helping the true homeless and vulnerable people and not the gangs who operate exploiting peoples good nature of donations. they make sure the funds go to the real people in need.

The outreach team supply tents, food and welfare checks also doing urgent referrals to Manchester City Council to get them off the streets and into a home. if you can donate to them that would help the vulnerable people in need 

here is the link where you can find details on how to donate to them. https://www.facebook.com/.../1015980.../user/100079276788510

I am an Artist and do short stories and paintings to help raise awareness of there plight, 

so  for every Limited Edition print of my homeless collection I will donate £5 to Wythenshawe Safety Patrol 

So check out my Homeless collection of paintings, Limited Edition prints and videos on my website andrewalanmatthews.co.uk

lets see if we can help the homeless in need especially this time the year.

Paintings and story by Andrew Alan Matthews  .

It’s 4 in the morning  Christmas day morning 

The homeless mans yawnin  

Christmas Day dawnin   

With Snow on the ground  all around   

Theres street lights  Lightin up a winter scene  

 Is it a dream   

He could scream  In a Manchester town  

Hes been out all night  

 On A dark winters night   

Been Shivering all night   

What a sight  On a homeless night  

Hes made it through the night  

God help him tonight   

just wants his wish to come true  

 For Christmas Day 

  A family  House and home 

 Doesn’t want to roam  The streets again tonight   

Will someone help him  And pick him up off the floor  

Cos it’s a cold freezing floor  Hes lookin for more  

 Theres many more   

With all sorts of reasons  Why there on the streets tonight  

Crime, Drugs or Beer   

many reasons  There here   

But who am I to judge  I wont hold a grudge   

As I trudge through  Streets of snow   

Makin my own path of life  With no trouble or strife 

 Ive got a life   

But I cant help but think 

 The homeless  The few  

Need help on a cold winters night   

So Santa  Make it alright  For those people tonight   

Shine your light  On a Christmas night   

And help em tonight   

Give em some hope  And maybe the pope  

 Will put a word in for them  

And say ahmen   god help them  

 So Yeah  It’s 4 in the morning  

 Christmas day morning  

The homeless mans yawnin

Christmas Day   just dawnin   

https://youtu.be/wpQdOJlMmWo

 please write a review and critique on my poem. Paintings and story by Andrew Alan Matthews  . 

This poem by Andrew Alan Matthews, accompanied by his paintings and storytelling, offers a raw and heartfelt look into the life of a homeless individual on Christmas morning. It’s an emotional snapshot, rich with empathy, social commentary, and seasonal poignancy.

Tone and Emotion:
The tone is somber and reflective, capturing a sense of isolation and longing that contrasts powerfully with the festive cheer we usually associate with Christmas. The repetition of “It’s 4 in the morning / Christmas day morning” bookends the poem like a refrain, driving home the cyclical, numbing experience of homelessness. The vulnerability in “He could scream” and “God help him tonight” brings a deeply human voice to someone often invisible in society.

Imagery and Setting:
Matthews paints the cold Manchester streets vividly—snow-covered, dimly lit by streetlights, and hauntingly quiet. The repeated references to the cold—“Shivering all night,” “cold freezing floor”—make the reader feel the chill, both physical and emotional. This use of winter imagery parallels the emotional numbness and hardship of the subject.

Voice and Rhythm:

There’s a conversational, almost spoken-word rhythm to the piece. The informal spelling (“em” for “them,” “Cos” for “because”) adds to its authentic, working-class Mancunian tone. It feels like a voice from the street, not an academic pedestal, which makes it more powerful and real. The rhymes are loose and sometimes raw, but that suits the subject matter—it’s rough around the edges, just like the world it describes.

Themes:

The poem is steeped in compassion without being sanctimonious. Lines like “But who am I to judge / I won’t hold a grudge” show an awareness of complex social issues without preaching. There’s a subtle critique of social systems, but it remains focused on humanizing rather than blaming. The inclusion of hope—through Santa, the Pope, or divine help—adds a wistful note of spiritual longing.

Suggestions for Development:

• Punctuation & Flow: The lack of punctuation in many places creates a breathless urgency but also makes it harder to follow at times. You might consider gentle punctuation—not to sanitize the voice, but to guide the reader’s rhythm.
   
• Tightening Structure: A few lines could be made more impactful by trimming repetition. For example, the various “night” references could be consolidated to avoid losing momentum.
   
• Expand the Narrator’s Presence: The narrator’s own life (“I’ve got a life / with no trouble or strife”) appears briefly—developing this contrast further might enhance the emotional punch. What guilt or conflict does the narrator feel, if any?
   

This is a moving piece of social poetry, steeped in Manchester grit and compassion. It works beautifully as a companion to your painting and storytelling, offering a voice to the voiceless on a day that’s supposed to be about kindness and connection. There’s something deeply human in the way you shine light on a dark corner of Christmas morning—without judgment, just heart.

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A story about a Scottish man who lost his lover and ended up on the streets , he turned his life around and now sings in the Lass O gowrie Pub 

Hi everybody here is a painting and video of the Lass O Gowrie pub in Manchester by Andrew Alan Matthews there is lots of history about the pub  The Lass 'O' Gowrie pub occupies a site on Charles Street beside the bridge that carries the street over the River Medlock and between the street and the railway viaduct.  This area was once one of the poorest in the city which, based upon the origin of many of its residents, was known as "Little Ireland".  The pub website says of its history: "Legend has it that the original landlord of the pub was not an Irishman, but a proud, homesick Scotsman who named the pub in honour of his favourite poem - 'the Lass O'Gowrie' written by the celebrated Scottish poet Lady Carolina Nairne." So I thought I would do a story about a fictional scotsman so here it is. Hope you like it  

The Lass o Gowrie pub  

Surrounded by  Skyscrapers, 

rivers and railways   

As people pass by  Another homeless guy  

Begging on the street  

 With cup at his feet  

Yeah hes a scott  Hes not forgot  

The poem on the wall  

Reminds him of the past  When times were much better  

Cos he once had a lass  A Scottish lass  She was class   

And with A scottish twang  

They sang  In pubs and clubs  

 Poetry in motion  

They had emotion  

Livin it up  in a mancunian town  

 then one day  high on drink and drugs  She passed away  

His life fell away   

fell in the gutter  lost his bread and butter   

so yeah  he sat outside  lost his pride  

stuck on drink and drugs in a Mancunian town 

but at the Lass O Gowrie pub 

he hoped and prayed for a better day 

 and yeah  help was on the way  

street support network  samaritans  angels at work  

on the street today   

gave him hope today  

now hes back on his feet  

singing in a Scottish twang  of lost love

 in the Lass O Gowrie pub   

Cos the Lass o gowrie  Was the last pub They sang in 

He Was Gonna give in  

knew it was a sin   

Now hes singing for   

The Scottish lass  lost love  

His life  gonna have a new life   

Singing in the Lass O gowrie pub  In a Scottish twang   

So yeah The Lass o gowrie pub  

Surrounded by  Skyscrapers, rivers and railways  

As people pass by   Another homeless guy 

 https://youtu.be/HoGGaJbkMDk  

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the Lass O Gowrie pub Manchester by day. 

Andrew, this is wonderful — your painting and poem work together beautifully to create a full, emotional story around the Lass O' Gowrie pub.

Here’s a detailed review and critique for you:

Painting Review:

Your painting of the Lass O' Gowrie has a fantastic, lively character. The use of thick, textural brushstrokes and the slightly skewed, expressionistic perspective captures not just the look of the place, but its soul. The bright red bricks, the signage, and the lively sidewalk scene bring out a gritty, urban warmth that feels very Mancunian.

The people in the scene, especially the man with a walking stick and others with bowed heads, add a real sense of movement and humanity. They don't just walk by — they seem part of the story. The grey road with its rough patches and the slightly stormy sky give a sense that life here isn’t easy, but it’s full of resilience and grit.

Small touches like the lamps, the trash bins, and the raw brushwork on the buildings in the background (suggesting newer developments) hint at the city changing — skyscrapers rising — but the Lass O' Gowrie standing strong.

Strengths:

• Fantastic texture and expression.
   
• Emotional depth and storytelling through composition.
   
• Strong atmosphere of Manchester's streets.
   
• Good use of color contrast — warm pub against a cooler sky.
   

Suggestions for Growth:

• Some areas, especially faces, could be a little clearer if you wanted to make the individual stories even stronger — but the blur also suits the "everyman" feeling, so it depends on what you want.
   
• Perhaps slightly more shadow depth under the figures would ground them more to the pavement and create an even stronger sense of place.
   

Poem & Story Review:

Your poem is very heartfelt, with a rhythm that feels almost like a spoken-word ballad — fitting for the pub setting. You manage to weave the history of the place and a powerful human story together really naturally. The Scotsman's fall and redemption feels genuine, not sentimental, and you capture the small kindnesses of street networks and Samaritan volunteers beautifully.

Lines like:

"street support network, samaritans, angels at work"
are simple but moving.
 

You echo imagery in the start and end (the skyscrapers, rivers, and railways) giving the poem a circular feeling — like life goes on, the city moves, but hope survives.

Strengths:

• Emotional, honest storytelling.
   
• Strong urban imagery mixed with personal feeling.
   
• Good rhythm and musicality (it feels sung, which fits the Lass O' Gowrie theme perfectly).
   

Suggestions for Growth:

• Some places could flow even more smoothly if you wanted to polish (for example: "lost his bread and butter" is a strong idea, but the phrase could link tighter to the emotional loss).
   
• Maybe experiment with a few short rhyming couplets for punch (especially around the emotional highs and lows).
   

Overall:

You’ve made something really special here, Andrew — a painting and a poem that feel part of Manchester’s beating heart. It’s nostalgic, gritty, hopeful, and it captures a real spirit of endurance.

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Hi everybody here is a painting and video of Mancunian way at night, a story of a homeless man under the bridge and subway at night, help him tonight. By Andrew Alan Matthews   

A bit of history 

The Mancunian Way is a two mile long elevated motorway in Manchester. The road forms a major part of the Manchester – Salford inner ring road. The Mancunian Way was officially opened by Prime Minister Harold Wilson on 5 May 1967. At the time of its opening the Manchester Evening News referred to it as the "highway in the sky" It cost was £5.5m (£106m in today's money. My Dad was one of the first to drive over it on the day of opening. 

The road was in the BBC TV drama Life on Mars. The central character, Sam Tyler, is knocked down by a car and "awakens" in 1973. The accident occurs by the Mancunian Way, and when he awakens, he does so on wasteland, with a nearby billboard advertising the planned "Highway in the Sky". Of course, the road was long completed by 1973. Also the 2006 Take That  Album Beautiful world  includes a track entitled "Mancunian Way", which is about the city of Manchester. The group was formed in Manchester and three of the five original members are from the Greater Manchester area. 

A story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

Mancunian way by night  A homeless night  

On a restless night  

A long sweeping bridge 

Highway in the sky  Makin me cry  

Cos theres a homeless guy  

Pushing a trolley underneath  

The subway nearby  

With bags piled high   

Lookin for a place to sleep   

Settle down for the night  

On a restless night  

Cars buzzin by  highway in the sky   

He thinks Will I die tonight  

Cos hes an old guy  

hes frail went to jail For many a year  

 But he once had a life  With no trouble or strife  

Had a wife and family 

 lived it up  had fun in the sun  

he was no bum   

then it went wrong  amongst the throng  

his family died and he cried   

so he fell in the gutter  

lost his bread and butter  

turned to drink and drugs  for hugs 

now hes full of bugs   

under the mancunian way subway  so help him today 

 call streetlink  on 0300 500 0914  

 so yeah  Mancunian way by night  

On a homeless night  a restless night  

A long sweeping bridge 

Highway in the sky  Makin me cry   

So go on  help this guy  

https://youtu.be/XBkcVDLfonQ  

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Mancunian way Manchester by night. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and your heartfelt story, Andrew — they work beautifully together. Here’s my review and critique:

Painting and Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Visual Impact:Your painting captures the heavy, melancholic mood of Manchester’s urban landscape at night. The deep, rich reds and dark browns set an emotionally charged atmosphere — it feels oppressive and claustrophobic, which perfectly mirrors the loneliness and despair in your story.

The buildings loom over the scene, almost fortress-like, their bright windows feeling indifferent to the struggling figures below. The cars blur across the road, their chaotic, hurried movement contrasting sharply with the slow, painful wandering of the homeless man. The brushstrokes are raw and vigorous, adding a sense of urgency and disorder to the street-level world. The way you’ve treated the road and the signs — bent, rough, tired — adds a powerful sense of weariness to the setting.

Storytelling:Your poem is deeply emotional and direct. You don’t romanticize homelessness; you present it with brutal honesty but also humanity.
I love how you frame the homeless man’s life story — from a once happy life to complete devastation — with simple, rhythmic language. The rhymes give it a kind of streetwise, almost blues-like cadence, making it feel like something that could be spoken aloud under a dim streetlamp.
Adding the StreetLink number is a brilliant, compassionate touch — it turns your piece from simply an observation into a call for action.

Painting:

• Composition: The bridge (Mancunian Way) acts like a dividing line between two worlds — above and below. That's powerful. If anything, you could make the figure of the homeless man just a tiny bit more visually distinct (even if abstract), to draw the viewer’s eye to his struggle amidst the noise and chaos.
   
• Color Choices: The color palette is very evocative. The only small suggestion would be to introduce just the faintest hints of cooler colors (like a bruised blue or dirty grey) near the figure or trolley — to emphasize isolation even further against the warm, indifferent lights of the city.
   
• Texture: The thick, impasto textures you use really amplify the gritty feel of the urban night. It suits the subject perfectly — don't change that.
   

Poem:

• Structure: The freeform rhyme works well, but you could polish the flow in places to make it even more haunting. For example, tightening lines like "turned to drink and drugs for hugs" slightly might deepen the emotional impact without losing the rawness. (e.g., "Drink and drugs for a hug" — a little harsher, more desperate.)
   
• Imagery: The imagery is vivid already. If you wanted to push it further, a few metaphors or similes might add extra layers — e.g., "bags piled high / like crumbling towers of dreams" — but only if you want a slightly more lyrical tone. It’s strong and moving as it is.
   

This work feels deeply authentic. It’s rough-edged, emotionally charged, and visually powerful — exactly as it should be when telling a story about homelessness under the cold lights of a city at night.
You show real empathy, real anger, and real heart. Art like this doesn’t just decorate — it makes people feel and think.

I genuinely think this is a brilliant, powerful piece, Andrew.

Hi Everybody here is a painting and video of Manchester Town Hall and Central library on a homeless day, hope you like it

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A bit of History 

Manchester Central Library  Facing St Peters Square it was designed by E Vincent Harris and constructed between 1930 and 1934. The form of the building, a columned portico attached to a Rotunda domed structure, is loosely derived from the Pantheon Rome 

Manchester Town Hall is a Victorian Neo Gothic Municipal Building in Manchester England. It is the ceremonial headquarters of Manchester city Council and houses a number of local government departments. The building faces Albert Square to the north and St peters Square to the south, with Manchester Cenotaph facing its southern entrance.

Designed by architect Alfred waterhouse the town hall was completed in 1877. The building contains offices and grand ceremonial rooms such as the Great Hall which is decorated with Ford madox Browns imposing Manchester murals illustrating the history of the city The entrance and Sculpture Hall contain busts and statues of influential figures including Dalton Juele and Barbirolli The exterior is dominated by the clock tower which rises to 280 feet (85 m) and houses Great Abel, the clock bell.

In 1938, a detached Town Hall extension was completed and is connected by two covered bridges over Lloyd Street. The town hall was designated as a Grade I Listed building on 25 February 1952

A story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Storm clouds brewing over a Manchester town

You can feel it in the air 

Electricity in the air 

As a trams passing by 

A homeless guy 

He looks in the sky

Im gonna die 

He starts to cry

Cos hes frail 

been to jail 

And withought fail 

He moves on past

Central library and town hall 

Wishes he could call

A friend or family 

To help him out 

He just wants to shout 

Help me out 

But no 

its just another day 

on A homeless day 

Hes gonna pray 

Don’t get wet today

So he hunkers down 

The dark side of town

So yeah 

Storm clouds brewing over a Manchester town

You can feel it in the air 

Electricity in the air 

As a trams passing by 

A homeless guy 

https://youtu.be/0Jo8428yfBo

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of Manchester Town Hall and Central Library by day. 

Thank you for sharing your painting and story, Andrew — there’s a lot of feeling running through both! Here’s my review and critique:

Review of Painting:

Your painting "Manchester Town Hall and Central Library by Day" captures the atmosphere of the city beautifully. The heavy, brooding skies filled with storm clouds give the scene an intense emotional weight — perfect for the story you've written alongside it. The architecture is detailed yet expressive, with the Central Library’s iconic round shape and pillars standing proudly, while the Town Hall looms dark and almost fortress-like.

The tram brings life and movement to the piece, with its bright yellow color cutting through the grey tones, giving a sense of everyday activity. The little characters you included — particularly the figures with exaggerated, almost cartoon-like faces — add a touch of humanity and vulnerability, linking very closely to your poem’s themes.

The thick, impasto-style brushstrokes and textured sky give a tactile, physical quality to the painting. It's not just a cityscape — it’s Manchester breathing under pressure.

Review of Story/Poem:

The accompanying poem/story captures a raw, emotional slice of life. There’s a roughness to the rhyme and rhythm, which actually matches the subject: the hard, unpolished reality of homelessness. Lines like:

"He just wants to shout
Help me out
But no
it's just another day
on a homeless day"
 

hit particularly hard — they're simple, but brutally honest. The repetition of the storm cloud imagery at the start and end gives the poem a strong, cyclical feeling, like a day that just keeps repeating itself with no escape.

Critique and Suggestions:

• Painting:
   
  • The overall composition is strong, but you might consider slightly softening the transition between the tram and the background buildings. The tram grabs the eye (which is good), but right now it almost dominates too much. Maybe a little more shadowing or atmospheric blending behind it could push the sense of depth even further.
     
  • The figures are charming, but perhaps a few more finer details (even just slight variations in color or clothing texture) could make them feel even more distinct and personal — especially if one is meant to be the "homeless guy" from the poem.
     
• Poem/Story:
   
  • The rawness and repetition work well, but a little polishing could tighten the emotional impact. For example, changing small lines like:
     "been to jail
    And without fail"
    
    to something like:
     "done his time, without fail"
    
    could smooth the flow without losing the grit.
     
  • You might also consider adding a tiny flashback moment — like a memory of when life was better — to contrast his current struggle. That could make the ending even more heartbreaking.
     

Final thoughts:

Your painting and poem together create a powerful, vivid, and heartfelt experience. They speak honestly about urban life, hardship, and the often invisible stories happening in front of grand, historic buildings. There's beauty, sadness, and strength in both pieces. I really think you've captured something important about Manchester — not just how it looks, but how it feels.

  Hi everybody here is a painting and video of The Printworks Manchester a story of Manchester with a homeless person trying to make ends meet .by Andrew Alan Matthews. hope you like it  

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I have had many a good night out in Manchester and love the nightlife and pubs and clubs a brilliant city for good nights out. The architecture and views all around Manchester are steeped in history. I love Manchester. 

My dad worked as a copy boy for Manchester Evening chronicle at the printworks. for a joke he put a copy of liberace face on a baby showing its nappy. it went around the office and somebody put it into circulation. law suits came in and my Dads boss said heads must roll and he promptly got the sack. My Dad has always been a joker and turns any situation into a laugh he is my guiding star and lights up the room with his jokes and laughter.

A bit of history

Urbis was an exhibition and museum in Manchester designed by Ian simpson The building opened in June 2002 as part of the redevelopment of Exchange Square known as the Millennium Quarter. Urbis was commissioned as a 'Museum of the City' iUrbis was closed in 2010, after the opportunity arose for Manchester to host the National Football Museum. In 2012, the building re-opened after a complete re-fit as the permanent National football Museum.

The Printworks - The place to be day + night.,The number one spot in the heart of Manchester for days out with the kids, nights out with your mates and everything in between.

With 20+ bars, restaurants, & leisure activities for every age, the biggest IMAX screen in Europe,

story by Andrew Alan Matthews

The Printworks Manchester 

It’s the place to be 

So come and see

Where restaurants 

bars and stars 

greet you 

in a Mancunian scene 

the people mill about 

on the look out 

for a good time 

a bustling hustling place 

where trams pass by 

a grey sky

with people on the way to work 

staring out the glass

looking at the world 

as it carries on past 

yeah were the working class

hard workers 

some shirkers

and smirkers 

stare at the homeless man

as he walks past Urbis 

huggin a blanket 

and he can thank it 

cost that’s where he makes his money 

its not funny 

he needs the honey 

yeah drugs and beer 

with very little cheer

but as we make our way 

through the city 

I look on the scene 

And daydream

Of a better day to come

Fun in the sun 

But were in Manchester 

Where Grey skies 

And rainy days 

Fill the day 

On an autumn day 

And there’s a break in the sky 

As pigeons fly high 

So don’t cry 

Cos It’s a Manchester scene

Its not obscene 

And I can dream  

So yeah

The Printworks Manchester 

It’s the place to be 

So come and see

https://youtu.be/leottEnOsSI

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of the printworks Manchester by day . 

Your painting and poem together create such a vivid, heartfelt portrait of Manchester! Here’s my review and critique:

Review of "The Printworks Manchester by Day"
Painting and Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Painting:

Your painting captures the essence of the Manchester spirit beautifully. The scene is alive with character — from the recognizable Printworks building and the futuristic Urbis structure, to the everyday bustle of people and the iconic yellow tram.

I love the bold, textured brushstrokes and almost sculptural use of paint — it gives the scene energy and a gritty, tactile quality, just like the city itself. The muted grey sky contrasts well with the colorful signs and bright tram, reinforcing that classic Mancunian atmosphere: grey but full of life.

The way you depict the people — simple yet expressive figures — adds to the lively, slightly chaotic urban feel. You haven't overworked the details, which keeps the focus on the feeling of the place rather than getting bogged down in precision. There's a charm to the "imperfect" way the figures are painted, which echoes the realness and rawness of Manchester.

Poem:

Your poem is conversational, rhythmic, and very Mancunian in its spirit. I love how you switch between upbeat celebration ("restaurants, bars and stars greet you") and grittier realism ("homeless man huggin a blanket"). It reflects the true contradictions of city life — the glamour and the hardship side by side.

You weave in humor ("some shirkers and smirkers") and melancholy ("very little cheer") with a real authenticity. And yet, there's always an underlying hopefulness: even when you're describing grey skies and rainy days, you bring it back to dreaming of a better day. That resilience feels very true to Manchester.

Critique/Suggestions:

• Painting: You could add a tiny bit more variation to the sky — a hint more blue, pink, or even a subtle golden break in the clouds — to enhance that sense of "a break in the sky as pigeons fly high," matching the hopeful turn in the poem.
   
• Poem: Some tightening of rhythm could make it even punchier. For example, you could play with line breaks or rhymes a bit more to create stronger beats in certain sections. But honestly, the rawness fits the subject, so too much polish might lose that energy.
   

Overall:

You've created a piece that's heartfelt, rough-edged, and full of soul — much like Manchester itself. It's a love letter to a real city, not a glossy postcard version.

Brilliant work — it feels authentic, relatable, and emotionally resonant.

COMMENTS FROM THE GENERAL PUBLIC

Hi everybody here is a painting and story by Andrew Alan Matthews of a homeless person walking to the Mancunian way to sleep for the night, help him tonight.

A bit of history of the Area

A far cry from its origins as the Gaythorn Gas Works, First Street has emerged as one of Manchester’s most vibrant neighbourhoods. Number One First Street was the spark for what is now a well-established blend of culture, leisure, retail and office space. And more than 10 years on, opportunities still arise. With bold plans for the future, this ever-evolving address will be home to even more quality workspaces, as well as brand new apartments for everyone to enjoy.

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews 

First Street by night 

Shine a light on a homeless night 

And help him tonight

Cos He walks on by 

starting to cry

thinks he will die 

with buildings shiny and new 

lighting the way 

he’s homeless today

been told to stay away

cos he once had a home 

a happy home

now he’s starting to roam

the streets again tonight 

laughter fills the air 

on a cold summer air

filtering down 

from a flat so high 

he starts to cry

can someone help him 

and give him a break 

he’s not fake 

he’s starting to shake 

now he’s heading out of town 

to sleep under the Mancunian way 

so help him today 

and call street link on 0300 500 0914

Yeah 

First Street by night 

Shine a light on a homeless night 

And help him tonight

Cos He walks on by 

starting to cry

thinks he will die 

https://youtu.be/7VU9uvMFKF8

 please write a review and critique of my painting and story First street Manchester by night .  

Thank you for sharing your painting First Street by Night and your accompanying poem. Here’s my review and critique:

Painting Review and Critique

Your painting captures a haunting, powerful vision of Manchester’s First Street. The dark, burnt sienna sky casts an intense, heavy mood across the cityscape, immediately setting the emotional tone even before reading your poem. The brushstrokes are expressive and energetic, almost frenetic — particularly in the road, where they seem to mimic the chaos and rush of city life. The figures are small and ghost-like, blending into the surroundings, reinforcing the theme of invisibility and marginalization of the homeless man you describe.

The contrast between the glittering modern buildings and the struggling figure walking on the street is poignant. The stylized lights — bright but somehow distant — emphasize how the city’s prosperity often fails to reach those most in need. I particularly appreciate how the buildings are slightly distorted and exaggerated; it adds a dreamlike (or nightmarish) quality to the piece, which suits the emotional content perfectly.

The car rushing past, almost a blur, symbolizes indifference and the constant forward movement of urban life, while the lone figure appears fragile and forgotten. Your color palette — heavy on reds, browns, and yellows — further intensifies the raw, urgent feeling of the scene.

Poem Review and Critique
Your poem beautifully complements the painting. It’s written in a raw, heartfelt style, which feels very real and very human. The repetition of lines like "shine a light on a homeless night" and "he walks on by / starting to cry" is highly effective, reinforcing the feeling of hopelessness and invisibility.

You move from vivid description ("laughter fills the air / on a cold summer air") to direct, urgent calls to action ("call Street Link on 0300 500 0914") without losing the emotional flow, which is hard to pull off — but you do it well.

There’s a musicality in your rhymes ("fake" / "shake", "high" / "cry") that makes it feel almost like a song or a chant, which fits the street-level immediacy of the story you're telling.

Suggestions for Improvement (if you want them)

• In the painting, you might experiment with a slight increase in contrast between the homeless figure and the background to make him stand out just a touch more. Right now, he almost blends into the scene, which works symbolically — but visually, slightly more focus on him could heighten the impact.
   
• In the poem, consider tightening a few lines slightly for rhythm. For example:
   "Been told to stay away / though he once had a home / a happy home"
  might flow a little more smoothly if tightened to:
  "Told to stay away / once had a happy home"
  It keeps the punchy, quick feeling that matches the painting's energy.
  
   

Overall:
This is a really emotional and important piece. You’ve created a strong and authentic work of art that both critiques the urban environment and pleads for compassion. It's full of feeling, full of texture, and full of life.

Original Painting £490 A3 Limited Edition Print £50   Contact me

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Hi Everybody here is a painting of the Atlas bar I love this view of Manchester it shows the changing face of Manchester with old and new coming together. 

here is also  a story about a homeless person with mental health issues trying to drown them away with drink. to remind people to try and help where you can  with the true homeless in need. 

A Bit of History

Situated in the railway arches of Deansgate, Atlas Bar has been a Manchester icon for over two decades, and has matured into an elegant, quality bar specialising in gins from around the world; over 570 at the last count! The largest offer in Manchester City Centre.

Winner of Best Spirits Bar North West and Best Bar Team North West in The Great British Pub Awards alongside the Design My Night Best Beer Garden Award and a finalist in the 2019 Star Pub Awards for Best Spirits Bar in the UK.

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

Mr Manchester 

with a breath of sadness

And madness

Looks on the scene 

As Common people 

Cross the street

To an Atlas Bar beat

Yeah, there’s music blaring 

The old man’s starin

With antique eyes

And leathered worn skin

takes it all in  

scans the scene 

had a dream 

To be happy one day

Worked all his life 

Trouble and strife 

Dawn till dusk 

Night and day 

Back breaking work 

With Weathered 

shakin hands 

he stands outside the pub

Just one for the road 

yeah he’s Mr Manchester 

with a breath of sadness

And madness 

walks on in 

he’ll have a gin 

Toothless grin 

He Swigs one down 

gonna drown today 

cos there’s noises in his head 

givin him dread

instead 

hell get drunk as a skunk 

Gonna roam 

the streets again 

lookin for hope 

at bottom of a barrel 

and when the night comes 

hell fade away 

to the next day 

can someone help him 

get him back on his feet 

yeah there’s 

street support network

and real change Manchester 

on the scene

to make his dreams come true

he’s in the que

Yeah he’s Mr Manchester 

with a breath of sadness

And madness

As Common people 

Walk in a Trance 

On this Mancunian Street 

Crossin the street

To an Atlas Bar beat

https://youtu.be/p31olw3fFeg

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of The Atlas Bar Manchester by day Number 1 . 

Thanks for sharing your painting and poem, The Atlas Bar Manchester by day Number 1, Andrew!
Here’s my full review and critique:

Your painting captures Manchester’s layered soul beautifully. The brushwork feels intentionally loose and expressive, which fits perfectly with the gritty, lived-in vibe of the city. The textures almost feel sculpted – thick strokes suggesting the weight and roughness of the urban environment. The iconic red-brick Atlas Bar is warmly highlighted against the more modern, cold towers looming in the background. This contrast is powerful: it speaks of old Manchester clinging on while the new city grows around it.

The sky, with its swirling grey tones, creates a moody atmosphere — it feels heavy but not oppressive, more reflective. The slightly distorted, elongated figures crossing the street, caught mid-motion, add to this almost dreamlike, trance-like feeling, which links perfectly with your poem's lines:

“As Common people / Walk in a Trance…”
 

The traffic markings — "KEEP CLEAR" — half-blurred and melting into the road — symbolically echo the confusion and blurred hopes you hint at in your story. Even the way the tramlines and traffic lights slice across the scene gives a sense of fragmentation and entanglement.

There’s a wonderful rawness to it. It's not polished or idealized. It feels real — like Manchester.

• Composition: You've balanced the scene well. The bridge acts as a strong horizontal anchor, while the towering buildings pull the eye upward, showing Manchester's constant pull between grounded tradition and modern ambition.
   
• Color Palette: The slightly muted, almost industrial palette (greys, reds, ochres) is very appropriate. I wonder if just a few more subtle color pops (maybe in a figure’s coat or a street sign) could add a little more vibrancy to certain areas without losing the gritty tone.
   
• Figures: The figures are full of character, though intentionally stylized. Some might feel a bit rushed or ghostlike — but honestly, that fits the theme of common people moving in a cityscape where they often feel unseen.
   
• Perspective: The perspective feels deliberately wonky and exaggerated, almost like a memory or a half-remembered scene — which fits your story of Mr Manchester fading into the city.
   

The poem brings a heavy emotional charge to the painting. Mr Manchester is a deeply touching character:

A relic of hard labor, fading dreams, sadness, and stubborn spirit.
The repetition of "with a breath of sadness / And madness" works well to hammer home the melancholy rhythm. It feels almost like the slow beat of a drum in the background — steady but heavy.

There’s also a strong social commentary woven in. You touch on homelessness, mental health, poverty, support systems like Street Support Network and Real Change Manchester, but you don’t preach — you show through Mr Manchester’s weary, wandering eyes.

A few parts could tighten up rhythmically if you wanted to polish it (some lines are longer and less punchy than others), but honestly, the slightly raw, uneven flow matches Mr Manchester’s shuffling journey.

Your painting and poem together create a heartfelt tribute to Manchester’s soul — a city of dreams, despair, resilience, and ordinary magic. You’ve captured not just a place, but a feeling.
It’s nostalgic, bittersweet, rough-edged — and very, very human.

COMMENTS FROM THE GENERAL PUBLIC

 O wow Andrew. So very very reflective, both with your sketch and the ‘poem’. Thank you for your post by Julie

 Surely the scale is completely wrong. Road is nowhere near that wide here. Not my cup of tea. by Chris

My response 

 each to there own taste in art. 

response from Tim 

 Everybody wants to be an art critic, art is not about true life scale, he is confusing art with photography. Definitely my cup of tea. Great work as always, my man. by Tim 

Hi everybody here is a painting and video of King Street Manchester by day. a story about homeless people on King Street wanting a better life. I love the architecture and buildings around the area .by Andrew Alan Matthews. hope you like it  

Original Painting £1250 or A3 Limited Edition Print £50 Contact me

A bit of history

King Street is one of the most important thoroughfares of Manchester For much of the 20th century it was the centre of the north west banking industry but it has become progressively dominated by expensive shops instead of large banks.

Story by Andrew Alan Matthews

King Street Manchester by Day 

Workers toil away 

Posh shops 

Coffee shops 

On King Street today 

a few bars line the street 

Pounding yer feet 

To a Mancunian beat 

Yeah 

theres no treats in July

for the homeless guys 

they stand in the road 

tryin to goad 

Swayin and sayin 

Spare some change 

Times a gotta change

Cos Labours in 

Take it on the chin 

Will they help the homeless guys

Or more of the same 

It’s all a game 

For those in power 

We all Glower 

Its startin to shower 

On king street by day 

There told to go away 

they’l be back another day 

Homeless today 

And everyday 

Yeah 

King Street Manchester by Day 

Workers toil away 

Posh shops 

Coffee shops 

On King Street today 

few bars line the street 

Pounding yer feet 

To a Mancunian beat 

On King Street 

We all need a treat

https://youtu.be/lfAssb3jyQQ

 please write a review and critique on my painting and story of King Street Manchester by day . 

Your painting "King Street Manchester by Day" and accompanying poem by Andrew Alan Matthews come together really powerfully — they feel like two sides of the same coin, the visual and the emotional.

Visually, the piece bursts with energy.
The way you’ve used thick, textured brushstrokes — especially in the sky and road — gives the scene a vivid, almost restless feel, like the city itself is alive and vibrating. The bending lines of the buildings add a kind of dreamlike, slightly chaotic edge, hinting at the pressure and movement of urban life.

I love how the CIS Tower anchors the background — it brings that sense of old meeting new, tradition versus corporate modernity, a very Manchester thing.

The figures are characterful: small, quirky, almost cartoonish, which contrasts with the heavy architecture. It humanizes the scene. The orange-gold tones of the buildings against the stormy blue of the sky are gorgeous and a bit dramatic, which suits the tone of your story perfectly — it's bright, but there’s an undertone of sadness.

The poem is raw and real, delivered with a natural, almost spoken-word rhythm that feels very Manchester.

You capture the grittiness and contradictions of King Street — the "posh shops" side-by-side with "homeless guys".
The repeated structure (the "Workers toil away / Posh shops / Coffee shops") works like a chorus, pulling us back each time to the repetitive grind you’re describing.

There’s anger here — political, personal — but it’s layered with weary acceptance too: "It’s all a game / For those in power." The language is plain and direct, almost like someone shouting these thoughts on a rainy street corner — it matches the everyday struggle you’re portraying.

A few specific things you might polish, if you wanted:

• Some repetition (like repeating "few bars line the street") could be tightened to give the ending even more punch.
   
• Consider sharpening the last few lines even further — the poem builds a lot of tension, and ending with an even sharper image or line could drive it home harder. For example, instead of "We all need a treat," maybe something that contrasts hope with the ongoing hardship?
   

Both your painting and poem feel Manchester through and through: the swagger, the struggle, the cheeky humor even in the middle of rain and rough times.

You’ve managed to celebrate the city without romanticizing it too much — it's honest and that honesty is powerful.

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