Hi Everybody here are paintings and a Christmas Folk Song, hope you like it
https://youtu.be/uG8MZC7lcIA
Charity fundraising for the true Homeless people,
CHARITY FUNDRAISER FOR WYTHENSHAWE SAFETY PATROL
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"WYTHENSHAWE, NORTHERN MOOR & MANCHESTER, THE HOMELESS CITY, IT COULD BE ANY CITY !"
The homeless in Wythenshawe and Manchester need help,
So Help raise funds for Wythenshawe Safety Patrol , they use the funds to help the true homeless people of Wythenshawe and not the gangs that operate and exploit our good nature,
They supply Tents, food, clothing and help to get vulnerable people back into accommodation with Manchester City Council
So when you donate to them you know the funds are used to help the true homeless people.
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the Plight of the homeless on the streets of Wythenshawe, Manchester and Salford is on the increase,
I help out when I can on safety patrols and I also donate monthly to Wythenshawe Safety patrol trying to help the homeless and vulnerable people get back on there feet, if you can donate to them this would help there cause.
here is the link where you can find details on how to donate to them.
https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100079276788510
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I am also an Artist and do short stories and paintings to help raise awareness of the plight of the homeless and vulnerable people and have dedicated a page on my website to the homeless
I try to bring attention to the plight of the homeless in my way by producing art, videos, stories and poems.
I share these on social media with the hope that at least I have played a part in bringing attention to the plight of the homeless.
so for every Limited Edition print of my homeless collection I will donate £5 to Wythenshawe Safety Patrol
So check out my Homeless collection of paintings, Limited Edition prints and videos on my website andrewalanmatthews.co.uk
lets see if we can help the homeless in need especially this time the year.
Link to my homeless collection webpage https://andrewalanmatthews.co.uk/homeless-video-collection
CHECK OUT THE INTERVIEW ON WFM 97.2 helping raise awareness and Funds for Wythenshawe Safety Patrol
https://youtu.be/p_k7OdV8hSQ
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link to my Homeless collection webpage
https://andrewalanmatthews.co.uk/homeless-video-collection
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Find below links to charities to help the homeless.
If you want to donate to help the homeless here is a link to the charity that I support
Wythenshawe Safety-patrol Donation Page
link to wythenshawe Safety patrol donation page
https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100079276788510
for every Limited Edition print of my homeless collection I will donate £5 to Wythenshawe Safety Patrol
Link to my homeless collection webpage
https://andrewalanmatthews.co.uk/homeless-video-collection
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My paintings, stories and videos capture fleeting glimpses of people places and social issues, I aim to bring my cityscape paintings to life in an expressionistic style, blending emotion, movement, and atmosphere to reflect the world as I see it, also turning negatives to positives in my way.
I hope you enjoy exploring my work, and please feel free to share your thoughts or comments — I’d love to hear what you think.
My Motto, BEE Positive.
Original Available, or A3 Limited Edition print £50 contact me https://andrewalanmatthews.co.uk/shop
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Song by Andrew Alan Matthews
It was a Mancunian Christmas day
Near Mancunian way
Been told to stay away
No pubs open today
No fun in lockdown babe
Masks are here today
You know its No way
To live today
So Have a Mancunian Christmas cheer
Near the atlas bar
You know its not too far
Its left a scar
Been told to stay away
No pubs here today
No fun in lockdown babe
Masks are here today
Castlefields cold this year
It’s the end of the year
no beer or cheer and isn’t it queer
The wind cuts you to the bone
Mancunian Christmas dear
Oasis playin
here so give us a cheer
And its the masterplan
And ive got a plan
paint a Mancunian scene
its not obscene
Mancunian Christmas babe
on Deansgate way
Been told to stay away
pubs not open today
No fun in lockdown babe
Masks are here today
Down near the oyster bar
Someones robbin the car
Mancunian Christmas babe
the snow is fallin now
on an Urbis night
its alright
So happy Christmas all
To one and all
A Mancunian Christmas to you
Hope you don’t get the flu
see you all
On A mancunian Christmas day
near Mancunian way
https://youtu.be/uG8MZC7lcIA
please write a review and critique on my song Mancunian Christmas day near Mancunian Way.
ChatGPT said:
That’s a really characterful and heartfelt song, Andrew — it captures a very specific moment in Manchester’s recent history, blending local realism, humor, and melancholy in a way that feels both grounded and nostalgic. Here’s a detailed review and critique of “Mancunian Christmas Day (Near Mancunian Way)”:
🎶 Review: “Mancunian Christmas Day (Near Mancunian Way)”
By Andrew Alan Matthews
Andrew Alan Matthews’s “Mancunian Christmas Day (Near Mancunian Way)” is a bittersweet, street-level portrait of Manchester under lockdown — a Christmas stripped of its usual warmth and bustle, yet still rich with local color and defiant spirit. The song reads like a diary entry written from the heart of a city that refuses to lose its identity, even when the pubs are closed and the streets are empty.
The opening lines —
It was a Mancunian Christmas day / Near Mancunian Way / Been told to stay away —
immediately set the tone of isolation and frustration. The repetition of “been told to stay away” and “no pubs open today” reinforces the claustrophobic monotony of lockdown life, while the colloquial “babe” adds a personal, conversational intimacy that grounds the song in everyday Mancunian speech.
The chorus sections — variations of “No fun in lockdown babe / Masks are here today” — become a kind of refrain that blends social commentary with dark humor. It’s relatable and simple, the sort of line that could be sung in a pub (if only they were open).
The song’s imagery is vivid and local:
- “Castlefield’s cold this year,”
- “Down near the Oyster Bar,”
- “On Deansgate Way,”
- “Oasis playin here so give us a cheer.”
These landmarks root the listener firmly in Manchester’s geography — a city simultaneously proud, gritty, and sentimental. The Oasis reference adds a clever cultural echo, as though the ghosts of Britpop are still ringing through the empty streets.
There’s also an undercurrent of resilience — in lines like “And it’s the masterplan / And I’ve got a plan / Paint a Mancunian scene”, we see the artist’s spirit pushing through bleakness. It’s self-referential too, tying your painter’s eye to your songwriter’s voice: transforming restriction into creativity.
🧠 Critique & Suggestions
Strengths:
- Authentic voice: The song feels true to Manchester and to you — no pretension, just honest reflection.
- Local imagery: References to places and culture give it a strong sense of place.
- Emotional realism: The tone balances melancholy and humor effectively.
Areas for refinement:
- Rhythmic consistency:
Some verses could benefit from a slightly tighter meter to make the phrasing easier to sing. For example:
“Castlefield’s cold this year / It’s the end of the year / no beer or cheer and isn’t it queer”
could be smoothed to something like:
“Castlefield’s cold this year / The end of the year, no cheer / No beer, and isn’t it queer.”
- Structure:
The song works like a free-flowing narrative, but defining clearer verses, chorus, and a bridge could strengthen its musical form. The repeated “No fun in lockdown babe / Masks are here today” works perfectly as a chorus anchor.
- Emotional arc:
You might build toward a more hopeful or ironic ending — maybe the final verse could emphasize resilience or togetherness, even in isolation. For example, expanding “So happy Christmas all / To one and all” with a hint of optimism could leave a lasting emotional impact.
- Title refinement:
“Mancunian Christmas (Near Mancunian Way)” might flow more smoothly as a title, though keeping your current phrasing gives it a charmingly conversational feel.
🌆 Overall Impression
Mancunian Christmas Day (Near Mancunian Way) is a poignant urban folk ballad — a love letter to Manchester under strain. It captures the humor, grit, and stubborn cheer that define the city’s character, blending social commentary with personal reflection. It’s part lockdown lament, part working-class anthem, and wholly Mancunian.
With a bit of rhythmic tightening and structural polish, it could easily work as a performance piece or acoustic recording — something that would resonate strongly with anyone who lived through those strange, lonely winters.